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    Default Before the Aftermath

    Hellflare flash on rooftop
    beckons with a quake
    the maddened murmurs echo
    begs the black still wake

    single strobe in snapshot
    a severed second's stay
    till the blast of banshee noise
    heralds the coming fray

    all the sleepless ghosts now scatter
    directionless and free
    while the first song of the siren
    makes its way to me
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    It's super amazing
    amazing feel good use of word's

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    wow. very creative and great use of imagery. i felt like i was there, where ever "there" is. i'm not sure how to describe the mood. very interesting. great job with the imagery!

    "Thinking of you, where ever you are..."
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    That was great... No that was amazing ,wow .


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    This poem is very good ^^ you used the rhyming very well and it's organized perfectly. Is this some sort of forthcoming of our destruction with a war to end the world or something? That's just what I'm getting from it. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I kind of got the same feeling but then I also saw some faery names, not all good but not all bad. Your writing is always welcome, Luzifer, so keep writing, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Default amazing poem!

    I love your poem, it goes deep and i can relate. I love the way you strum your words togather, it makes you sit and think for a while. Love your imagination too. Looking forward to more!

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    Wow its an amazing poem. It really made me think. i like it

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