Gone Blank

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 06:40 PM

A poem I felt like writing ^^ I hope everyone likes it.

Gone Blank

I wish I could see
Whats right in front of me
But my mind is elsewhere
It seems to have gone away

My head is getting fuzzy
I can't seem to remember
Do I even want it to come back?
My mind has gone blank

I should be grateful
I should jump for joy
But...is there something
I just need to remember?

What if I'm plunged into oblivion?
No one would care
It matters not because
My mind has gone blank

I've forgotten something important
That's right in front of me
To everyone, it's plain to see
But it seems to have slipped free

I guess I never will remember
I care not anymore
I will embrace the darkness
Because my mind has gone blank

**poshyterra** · 02-03-2010 06:43 PM

great poem! a bit dark for my personal taste but amazing! kinda reminds me of the kingdom hearts series with the darkness, memory loss, missing, theme!

absolutely love it!!!

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 06:47 PM

I like it. ^^

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 06:49 PM

Thank you ^^ It's based upon something I'd rather forget that happened before and something I'd be willing to give up to reach that end of not caring memory loss about that certain memory lol. I'm sorry if it sounds so confusing.

LOL it does have the theme of KH a little I guess

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 06:49 PM

Originally Posted by TechCNgod

I like it. ^^

Thanks ^^

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 06:50 PM

Sorry I dont say more but I am not into this srt of thing too much, and reading. XD
Ps... dont double post just edit.

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 06:52 PM

It's ok, I understand ^^

I keep forgetting about that >.<

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 06:54 PM

Don't worry, but remember a double post is a sin that not even a small time troll like me would do, thats how bad it is.

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 06:54 PM

See? It is very bad. XD

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 06:59 PM

>_>

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 07:00 PM

Lol, I am awesome you know it.

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 07:07 PM

Huh? Who? What? They? I know no one by the status of awesome.....what is awesome?

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 07:09 PM

Slang. very impressive: That new white convertible is totally awesome.

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 07:13 PM

I was being sarcastic XD I know what awesome is ^^ lol

**Battler Ushiromiya** · 02-03-2010 07:16 PM

I know I know.....

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 07:17 PM

o.o?

**[email protected]** · 02-03-2010 07:37 PM

uhhhhh....
okie nvm.
That poem was Wonderful kirako! I loved the message and your approach to the poem. It was simple but subtle. The flow went smoothly along because each line was short. Like a careless little lament.

**Kaname Shikara** · 02-03-2010 07:41 PM

Thank you ^^ I'm glad you liked it

**ELR** · 02-03-2010 07:47 PM

A place where each person is placed at at least once in their life. I enjoyed reading it and I do hope to see more that have been written by you, don't quit writing, my friend. ^_^