Its a Acrostic poem. Hope you like it.
Lingering in my heart for so long
Obviously drained by the emotion
Viciously creeping into my mind
Every thought of you counts.
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Its a Acrostic poem. Hope you like it.
Lingering in my heart for so long
Obviously drained by the emotion
Viciously creeping into my mind
Every thought of you counts.
Woo! First to reply. L-O-V-E, I really love this. I think it's really good and its short, simple and cute, in my own opinion. You should post more x3
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I liked it! Short poems are epic in my opinion and you just made my opinion on that even stronger. L-o-v-e was a very smart poem on your part!
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Very good ^^
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The days fly by and the feelings remain
So far away and causing us pain
That's okay we'll make it through
Soon we'll get to say "I love you" ♥
Love the structure!
And the meaning in each letter is truly orignal
Keep upp the great work!
wow this is the first time i've seen a poem this short here. Its not bad. In fact its damn good! You don't need to have a long poem to make it good. This just proves it and it says so much in a few words. I applaud its K-I-S-S-ness.
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Trust me, I invented the meaning of short poem <3 I once made a poem with only three lines. I'm pretty sure that was the shortest poem on here xD it was really.. interesting.
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
This was a very good short poem! I liked it a lot. Even though it's short, it possesses much meaning. Good job! (:
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What a cute little poem. Acrostic poems are difficult for me. ^^;
it was intersting. i like it, its a nicer version of a kid's choice poem. cute
Originally Posted by [email protected]I understand. Your so in need of my talent huh! Well okay, I won't keep you waiting for long. I'll get a poem by the end of today or tommorow morning.
Nonon Jakuzure - Best Kill la Kill baePretty damn great! #spoke2soonOta "The Cutest Otaku" 2016 - Lol, how's your account doing lately? Oh wait.
That's a cute liitle poem. (//.^)
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You don't see too many acrostic poems on here. This one by far is really good and unique to use such a word as 'Love', was excellent to me. Continue the good work, I would like to see more from you.
I can't believe I've taken this long to reply!
And I've read this at least 8 times, too. >.<
Each time it just keeps getting better and better which is hard to believe since it's so short.
I mean, how many different ways can you fall for a poem?
Many apparently. ^^''
"Every thought of you counts."
Love love love love it.
cute little poem! short poems aren't my normal thing since i got some bad grades on short poems for them being short but i'm in absolute love with the poem.
can i marry it?
keep up the work and post more shorts cause i like 'em!!!
Last edited by poshyterra; 02-07-2010 at 04:43 PM.
Very well done man. It is nice, short and sweet.
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