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    Default A Lover's Sodem Cry.

    A Lover's Sodem Cry.

    You can do no wrong....
    For the shadows of my love forever enlightens you..
    Glamour me.
    For I am yours to bend
    Trying to put you on the path to mend..
    In my arms;
    Will you spend, an eternity with me?

    You can do no wrong...
    To my soul for I have already lost it to you..
    Take Me.
    To a place where roses are dark;
    Embark on this journey for you to set me free...
    Let me be with you;
    Forever isn't long enough...

    You can do no wrong...
    In my heart...
    Release me.
    Open my mind, and claim what is yours..
    Let us share the moonlight and broken stars;
    Keep the voices out.
    Let us live in the infinite..

    But you could do no wrong...
    So why does my heart feel this pain?
    Broken...
    amin mela lle; didnt you?
    you could do no wrong...
    In my heart..
    sorrow exists but only to prove you were real.

    This poem was inspired by "The Twilight Saga: New Moon" & "Hearing Damage - Thom Yorke"

    (NOTE: "amin mela lle" = "i love you" in Elvish)
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    Sounds good keep up the poetry ^-^

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    thank you
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    I'm gonna be truthful. I didn't like it too much. Seemed much weaker than your last one and well I expected more from the poem. I'm sure others will find it appealing and again, sorry if I sound harsh but that's how I do poetry!

    Keep it up. Oh yea, one thing I liked about the poem was that you based it on the twilight saga, very nice!
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    I love the set up of this poem. It's very organized and seems to be very thought out. Overall, it's a beautifully written piece and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Keep it up. =]


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    Wow!
    Thank you for your input
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    Wow i loved it. Absolutely loved it. I especially loved the beginning.
    It's so deep and emotional. Good job in your expressions and descriptions. It is a really good poem and has an interesting pattern.

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    Quote Originally Posted by [email protected] View Post
    Wow i loved it. Absolutely loved it. I especially loved the beginning.
    It's so deep and emotional. Good job in your expressions and descriptions. It is a really good poem and has an interesting pattern.

    Woah! you have nooooo idea how good that makes me feel; glad that you like it and thanks for your input!
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    You're very welcome! ^^


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