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    Default Moving On

    Wrote this a while ago, but didn't post it.
    Sorry!
    But I hope ya like it, and thanks for reading.
    *Tsuki*

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Moving On

    This world has gone one with out us,
    there's no point in staying here.
    We walk slowly on this bridge above,
    the waves that strikes at the side.

    Don't think as we fall,
    look to the sky and we smile.
    So this is what it feels like,
    to finally be at peace.

    Grab your hand and hold on tight,
    today we fly with our hearts.
    It's not a stupid suicide,
    we're not running away just simply moving on.

    Our world has been cruel, we've gone through it all,
    two children with nothing to live for.
    But we're not giving up; we still have hope.
    Someday our own time will come.

    The time when we can spread our wings,
    and live freely like a bird.
    Where we aren't tied down,
    by the shackles of humanity.

    Smile one last time,
    before the water rushes over.
    Down we fall, further and further,
    until we reach the bottom.

    Let out your breath, let your hair flow,
    with the soothing calm of the water.
    Down here all is fine, down here we are free,
    so stay with me and we'll meet in the next life over.
    Last edited by Tsuki.; 01-17-2010 at 01:12 PM. Reason: typo. . .


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    Aww now that is sad... you know your sis will be here for you to help you if you ever feel like that ok?

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    ^_^
    yup. Thanks, sis.
    But I'm sure I'll never feel like that. . .
    there are too many great people and things to live for. =D

    lol. Poor Novak. Can't be first, yet again.


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    Nice poem, and its sad.

    But I really loved reading it, just like all your other poems haha. Keep up the good work, like I said your very talented. Even though this was a old poem, still a good peice of work.


    lol. Poor Novak. Can't be first, yet again.
    So not fair. lmao.

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    XD
    Well, I'm glad you liked it, nonetheless.
    It's actually only two weeks old. XD


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    It is very good *Tsuki* lol

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    That was so beautiful. I actually felt at peace reading it. Bravo! ^_^

    ~Beautiful set made by *Tsuki* <333

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    Lol poor poor Novak. Just give up!

    Anyways that's a pretty sad poem you've got there but its also a good one. I liked the whole meaning behind the poem and I also liked the great flow installed into it. My favorite two stanza's were the last two, greatly written.

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    ^^^Omg your avi scared me. o_o;;
    But it was greatly written. Keep up the good work, daughter! <333

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    I gave you my heart to keep in your possession. It's very fragile and the only one I have left, so please don't break it. <3

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    reading this poem only some lines came into my heart

    “Moving on, is a simple thing, what it leaves behind is hard.”

    “Tears are words the heart can't express”
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    Quote Originally Posted by XxPantherChickxX View Post
    That was so beautiful. I actually felt at peace reading it. Bravo! ^_^
    ^_^ I'm glad! Thank ya' momma. ^_^ *bows*
    And don't worry! I'll keep on writin' even if no one reads it. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by Hardy

    Lol poor poor Novak. Just give up!

    Anyways that's a pretty sad poem you've got there but its also a good one. I liked the whole meaning behind the poem and I also liked the great flow installed into it. My favorite two stanza's were the last two, greatly written.

    I've run out of compliments to give you, so thus I'll end my comment here.
    He'll get it next time! I'm sure of it! . . . actually, I'm about 75% sure. . .

    Anyway . . . yay! That's . . . a lot of great compliments. O_O
    Thank you!

    Quote Originally Posted by utra_maniac
    reading this poem only some lines came into my heart

    “Moving on, is a simple thing, what it leaves behind is hard.”

    “Tears are words the heart can't express”

    hmm . . . those are some interesting lines.
    But it makes sense. . .
    Though there's one thing I'm wondering . . .
    Why did “Tears are words the heart can't express” come to your heart?


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    ^_^ I'm glad! Thank ya' momma. ^_^ *bows*
    And don't worry! I'll keep on writin' even if no one reads it. XD



    He'll get it next time! I'm sure of it! . . . actually, I'm about 75% sure. . .

    Anyway . . . yay! That's . . . a lot of great compliments. O_O
    Thank you!




    hmm . . . those are some interesting lines.
    But it makes sense. . .
    Though there's one thing I'm wondering . . .
    Why did “Tears are words the heart can't express” come to your heart?
    its as you poem title say's after you think you have moved on leaving behind everything the satisfaction a person get eventually comes in tears rather than words that express feeling's in heart
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    Quote Originally Posted by ultra_maniac View Post
    its as you poem title say's after you think you have moved on leaving behind everything the satisfaction a person get eventually comes in tears rather than words that express feeling's in heart
    *nods* I see . . . yes, I suppose that is another way of looking at it.
    Well, when I wrote it, I guess that it wasn't really me writing it.
    If that makes sense at all . . .


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    *nods* I see . . . yes, I suppose that is another way of looking at it.
    Well, when I wrote it, I guess that it wasn't really me writing it.
    If that makes sense at all . . .
    any one who write poem is not himself that time coz in a way his souls speaks in form of words so it is true you were not you when poem was been written
    and as i can see it your poem here is interesting in three way's
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    Three ways?
    How so?

    Oh my goodness!
    I am sooo sorry Kirako. >.<

    Quote Originally Posted by Kirako Shima
    It is very good *Tsuki* lol
    Thank you. >.< *bows*
    Last edited by Tsuki.; 01-18-2010 at 10:54 AM.


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    Three ways?
    How so?

    Oh my goodness!
    I am sooo sorry Kirako. >.<


    Thank you. >.< *bows*
    three ways to look at it are emotionally then it comes in

    “Tears are words the heart can't express” thats emotionally

    second is

    "motivation and inspiration or even admiration to move on
    or even say a happy way or message way to look at it"

    third is

    "like everyone is saying a sad way or a feel way"

    and if you can look at it in all three ways then i'll

    say you moving on
    Last edited by ultra_maniac; 01-18-2010 at 11:04 AM.
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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