Worry?

[Kaname Shikara]

Ok, so this is a rhyming poem. I'm writing this because of a really good friend of mine. He's going through some tough times and is trying to avoid me, or say he's fine when he's not. I just want to help him. Though I don't think he'll read this because he doesn't like poetry that much, I just want to write it. Well, I hope everyone likes it. ^^

Worry?

Keep these thoughts locked inside
or let him know there's nothing to hide?
In this mind is where they'll be
Until they're ready to be set free

The doubts that linger overhead
Will soon stain the ground red
What is going though your mind
That's making me fall so far behind

In those eyes I see
A content look, so serene
But what lies inside, I don't know
You never let your emotions show

Always wondering if you're really alright
But you keep me oblivious in the fight
Though your eyes foretell the pain
It doesn't mean you'll tell me to keep me sane

Endless worry and endless doubt
I just wish I could shout
To let you know you're a good friend
So open up and let yourself mend

[Rulloxp]

Nice Poem Kirako
I'm sure whoever its directed too will mean alot, and even too who it isn't directed towards.
Your poems are definally getting better, and stronger; and are growing more meaningful. I know im not an expert on poetry, but i know when i see a good poem!

[Kaname Shikara]

Thank you Rullo ^^ I'm just hoping he would consider reading it.

[Rulloxp]

Tell him that it would mean a lot to you if he does, and if he's a true friend and understands your feelings, im positive he will; rough times or not, friends always stick together, even in the worst of moods. (;
You've actually taught me that. -_-

[Kaname Shikara]

Maybe I'll ask later... >.< I hope he reads it. But..he may think I'm being a pest again. So, maybe I wont show him >.< Gah...don't know what to do lol. Yes you're right about that ^^ friends stick by each other ^^ I'm glad I taught you that o.o cool lol. ^^

[Anime Forum]

Aww :] I'm sure your friend will be over joyed knowing you wrote this! It had a great flow and a very good meaning.

[Kaname Shikara]

Thanks Raiken ^^ but I'm not too sure he'll want to read it >.< lol.

[Anime Forum]

No Problem, anytime. By the way, I'm sure he'll want too x] don't be afraid. Do it do it!

[Kaname Shikara]

You're right..I should show him, but he might think I'm trying to bother him again and find out why he's feeling like he is, and he'll think I'm a pest if I bug him..so lately I've been giving him his space and I hope he comes around and wants to talk to me again soon T-T