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    Default Her Beauty

    My pen hath not the ink,
    Nor my mind the wit,
    To capture here in verse by my hand,
    Her Beauty I behold.

    Light from an endless star filled sky,
    Her eyes.
    Countless summer's warm gentle breeze,
    Her whisper.
    A thousand crystal cool mountain streams,
    Her kiss.
    Miles of pure white sand beach,
    Her smile.
    Wave after wave of crashing crimson tide,
    Her passion.
    Ranges of majestic snow capped mountains,
    Her strength.
    Deepest and widest of dark blue oceans,
    Her love.

    All of Creation itself fails to compare,
    In the entire depth of Universe,
    No single being past or now resides,
    Her Beauty I behold.
    In this world everything changes except good deeds and bad deeds; these follow you as the shadow follows the body.

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    That was wonderful. I like your efficient use of words. Well done!!


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    well flow was nice amazing work of words
    Last edited by ultra_maniac; 01-02-2010 at 11:23 AM.
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    It did flow nicely and had a good meaning, good job on it.

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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