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    Dying Alone

    It was written from birth
    Engraved from the start
    Holding me captive
    Never letting me go
    My destiny is to be alone

    It is the way of life
    Born alone and dying alone
    Throughout time I'll be alone
    Feeling no warmth, having no love
    My life is heartless, cold and alone

    My heart, it starts to break
    My breath shortens with my depart
    Leaving you behind, I let go of life
    Whishing, praying, hoping to god
    That it's not my time

    But it is, it's my time to die
    And like it was written before
    I'm dying inside and out
    And without you here beside me
    I let go of my last breath of life

    And I die alone
    "Sometimes I wonder if you remember when I loved you"
    "And sometimes.. I wonder why it's you.. whom I still run to"

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    hmm . . . it hit me emotionally,
    but I'm not sure I like it. >.<


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    Nice poem...
    I can relate some of the lines you made.

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    Honestly, this poem was very depressing. It's descriptive enough where I can understand and feel the level of sadness you were trying to convey but the flow of it is a little off. I really hope you're not feeling this way right now, at one point I could relate. Good job though, it's definitely not a bad poem!


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    Unhappy Marriage Arranged by an Unborn Baby

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    that was stuning it hit my heart with first line and kept that till last
    *It was written from birth*
    amazing thought behind it you made my day reading this one poem
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    I can relate to a few lines in your poem. If your feeling this way I know how you feel so if you ever need a friend or someone to talk to about anything PM me and help you ^^ great poem by the way

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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