Earth..

[Anime-Prince]

The snow falls gently from the sky beyond
The earth's frozen worry, droplets of hope
Why do we humans, so fail to respond?
Why not bow to tree's, instead of the pope?

Lakes
River's
Trivial sounds
Floating
Angels
All around

Wind in our hair, and valour in the sea
Why don't we savour it, commit to the air
We trod on nature with 'what will be will be'
It's stupid when we can change, here.. there

Grass
Fire
Burn to show
Water
Air
A whirlpool flow

The moon looks out of it's self made sky
And shines fake light into our night
The power of sun and moon is high
Yet the will of nature we still seem to fight.

Strong
Fast
Built to last
Slender
Freed
Without the greed

Give animals the rights we take for granted!
Let those who call for peace be heard inside!
The idea would grow if you let it be planted
Or will you let down the planet, give up and hide?

Stars
Moon
Romantic swoon
Passion
Disguise
Fear in our eyes

There is more to existence than surfing the web
There's flowers, fruit and canyons galore
To see the 7 wonders leaves nothing unsaid
Don't just close your eyes, and shout for more

Run
Sprint
Let sweat be your glint
Hear
Blink
Simple don't think

Take a trip outside of our young narrow minds
Don't focus on you're thoughts, but the world around
There's answers in grass, beach and vines
There's more to music than making a sound..

[*Tsuki*]

Great!
It really makes you think about the world,
and how little we respect it.
But, at the same time it makes you want to go out and explore it.

I love how well it flows, it kinda reminds me of a river. XD
Totally and completely awesome.
You never cease to amaze.

[ultra_maniac]

amazing everything was perfect and amazing feeling towards poetry i am stuned

[Kaname Shikara]

That is true. Everything in the universe has meaning. Poetry for example, teaches people feelings and understanding, same with music. Very great poem, it just got better

[Anime-Prince]

Argh, thanks for the comments on this one.

[Kirei Shijin]

This is your best poem ever! I like all of your poems but there's just something about this one. I'm amazed. Well done.

[SigmaSD]

I agree with Kirei. This is one of your best poems you've ever written. I was truly amazed and captivated by the imagery of nature; so serene and awe-inspiring. Great job AP.

[Anime-Prince]

Really? Best ever.. man that's something. Thank you both, very much.

[Ellxeeva]

Wow...

[Anime-Prince]

Wha... you don't need to bow! You're better!

[Kirei Shijin]

You're the best poet on AF in my opinion. You have such an amazing talent!

[SigmaSD]

Wha... you don't need to bow! You're better!

Aww come on AP, you don't have to be modest all the time. The fact of the matter is that most of us poets here admire your work and always look forward to it. You manage to write so many great poems without ever losing your touch, and you seem to always build off form the last.

Whether you rhyme or not, you always add a certain rhythm to your poems which when combined with the rich language you posses, can transform the simplest of images to pictures of grandeur in our minds.

Just keep up the good work, 'kay?

[Ellxeeva]

I agree with them. Hihihi.

[Uta-chan~]

Wah, amazing~~
This was my favourite part (though I liked the whole poem, this line just makes it for me XP):

There's more to music than making a sound..

[Anime-Prince]

Whoa.. well I'm really glad you guys liked it so much. Thank you. Very much.

[Azul]

Wah, amazing~~
This was my favourite part (though I liked the whole poem, this line just makes it for me XP):

true dat. i am utterly speechless. where do you pull these from. its like one after the other after the other. such amazing stuff. i loved the flow and how it just rolls off the tongue. I tip my hat to you in awe and respect.

[Anime-Prince]

Ah, thanks Azul.. but you needn't do that.

Besides.. I'm quitting poetry writing.. so this was one of my last ones.