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    Default Onegai My Melody Kuru-Kuru Shuffle - Ore wa Usamimi Kamen

    http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/one...wausakamen.htm

    I know the guidelines said to point out the minor corrections to the original submitter via PM or e-mail but when I try to e-mail it simply says "That user has specified that they do not wish to receive emails" AND they have not been on the site since January of last year so a PM wouldn't do any good

    My corrections are minor and regard a few incorrect words that could not be other readings given the kanji (which I just submitted along with my translation) in order the edits are...

    光に包まれて あらわれる
    Hikari ni tsutsumarete arawareru
    ^ Original = "tsudumarete"

    長い長いミミが 空をさす
    Nagai nagai mimi ga sora wo sasu toki
    ^minor edit original lyrics said "susu"

    なぜだ なぜだ 焦がす炎
    Naze da? Naze da? Tamashii kogasu honoo
    ^how the heck did the original submitter get "tanoshii"? The meanings are completely different *and* "tanoshii" wouldn't work in context

    熱い血潮が 鋼の拳に宿る
    Atsui chishio ga hagane no kobushi ni yadoru
    ^once again not sure where the original's came from (original = "jishin no ga")

    ピンクの
    PINKU no honoo da
    ^This one is a bit strange too (original = "honmono")

    The lyrics are otherwise accurate (aside from having a couple unusual spacing choices ex. "kake rare ta" instead of "kakerareta" but I think that may just be personal preference on my part)
    And the first stanza isn't specified as being spoken compared to the rest but that's also just convienience

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    Give me your full translit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AzureDark View Post
    Give me your full translit.

    [Spoken] Kikoeru. Kikoeru. Ai ni nayamu hitobito no sakebi ga.
    Aku ni kurushimu hitobito no nageki ga.
    Datte usagi no mimi wa nagai 'n da mon
    Ai to seigi no shisha, Usamimi Kamen, sanjou!

    PINKU-iro no seigi no kage hitotsu
    Kurayami wo kirisaki arawareru
    Sadame no michi naraba tatakau dake sa
    Dare da? Dare da? Ore wo yobu sono koe wa

    Ai no inori wo fuminijiru mono
    (IKEMEN BIIMU!)
    Aku wa yurusanai! KIRU!

    Moero moero moero moero
    Usamimi Kamen yo
    Itoshii mono to heiwa ni ma no te ga nobiru
    Isoge isoge isoge isoge
    Usamimi Kamen yo
    Kikoeru kikoeru
    Kyou mo doko ka de Usamimi Kamen

    PINKU-iro no seigi no kage hitotsu
    Hikari ni tsutsumarete arawareru
    Nagai nagai mimi ga sora wo sasu toki
    Naze da? Naze da? Tamashii kogasu honoo

    Unaru tekken hibana wo chirasu
    (USAMIMI CHOPPU!)
    Aku wa yurusanai! Utsu!

    Hoero hoero hoero hoero
    Usamimi Kamen yo
    Atsui chishio ga hagane no kobushi ni yadoru
    Ore wa ore wa ore wa ore wa
    Usamimi Kamen da
    PINKU no honoo da
    Kyou mo doko ka de Usamimi Kamen

    PINKU-iro no seigi no kage hitotsu
    Jikuu wo tobikoete arawareru
    Kono mi ni kakerareta noroi wo toite
    Itsuka itsuka tatakai no hateru made

    Mamori nuku no da sekai no yume wo
    (USAMIMI KAATTO!)
    Aku wa yurusanai! Tatsu!

    Moero moero moero moero
    Usamimi Kamen yo
    Itoshii mono to heiwa ni ma no te ga nobiru
    Isoge isoge isoge isoge
    Usamimi Kamen yo
    Kikoeru kikoeru
    Kyou mo doko ka de Usamimi Kamen

    The spaces aren't working though

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    Yea I did write on the sticky about uploading a textfile if you use double-spacing.

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    Right I forgot about that ^_^; I tried attaching it this time I hope I did it correctly
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