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    Default Everything around me


    This one goes to my dad that past away.

    Leave comments and tell me what you think!

    You're everything around me

    You're the whisper in the wind
    You're the breeze between my hair
    You're the blanket that keeps me warm
    And I know you'll always be
    You're the ground beneath my feet
    You're everything that's pure and sweet
    You're everything around me

    You're the happiness that pours out of me from day to day
    The calmness that shows beyond my insolence
    The sunshine shining down
    The stars in the sky leading to heaven
    The tears that fall from the memories unforgotten
    You're everything that's pure and sweet
    You're everything around me

    You're the one that will be missing at my wedding
    A part of me that reflects in the mirror
    A ring that beams from my mothers finger
    A nearby cry heard through the walls
    A love so grievously broken
    You're everything that's pure and sweet
    You're everything around me







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    Oh, wow.
    While reading the last stanza,
    I was absolutely positive I was going to cry.
    Not sure why, it just made me very sad.

    It was a great read,
    and I like how the last two lines were repeated each time.

    I'm sorry about your father,
    but you're strong so I'm sure you'll be okay. ^^


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    Why thank you!
    Sorry to make you sad
    And again thank you, it's been a long time actually but It still comes to mind every so often, so poetry is where I release my feelings.
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    Aww, I wanted to be the first to reply to this poem.

    Anyways lol,
    thats a really great poem, sad too. No more happy ones? D: But yeah, really touching one about your father. Its nice you wrote a poem after him. Every part of that poem was just great, I'm jealous of your talent, haha, but seriously keep up the great work. I shall be waiting on your next poem.

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    Novak, you are just to kind! And i'm sorry for your jealousy lol
    But anyways, thanks for the comment. No worries, I'll think up a happy one..
    But again thanks for the comments from both of you!
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    =3 I beat Novak.

    Anyway . . . It's fine that it made me sad because it's a sad poem.
    If it's able to touch someone's heart enough to make them sad as well,
    even if it didn't happen to them, then it truly is a great piece of work.
    Or, that's what I believe at least.

    Keep writin' and I'll keep reading. ^_^


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    =3 I beat Novak.

    Anyway . . . It's fine that it made me sad because it's a sad poem.
    If it's able to touch someone's heart enough to make them sad as well,
    even if it didn't happen to them, then it truly is a great piece of work.
    Or, that's what I believe at least.

    Keep writin' and I'll keep reading. ^_^
    Not going to comment on that hahaha.
    Anyways.. I believe in the same thing! Woohoo!! xD
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    Loved this poem. you are truly an amazing artist.
    I almost cried as well. but that just shows that your poetry is able to affect someone, which obviously means it is awesome.

    Keep up the good work and keep writing!!!` =)

    ~~Bliss

    You're like an angel from a picture book...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bliss View Post
    Loved this poem. you are truly an amazing artist.
    I almost cried as well. but that just shows that your poetry is able to affect someone, which obviously means it is awesome.

    Keep up the good work and keep writing!!!` =)

    ~~Bliss
    Thanks bliss! I appreciate the comment!
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    That was so beautifully written that it made me tear up. Well done and I'm sorry about your loss.


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    Thanks kirei22!
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    just one thing for this poem
    amazing one and my comment on this one

    you are everything to me,
    your what I live for ,
    your the air I breathe,
    the wind that brushes against my cheek,
    the raindrops that kisses my lonely lips,
    the snowflakes that fall onto my face,
    your everything around me,


    I see your face everywhere I go,
    I cant ignore this feeling,
    I have fallen for you,
    I don't know how to say what I really feel for you,
    so hard to describe like the moon and the stars,
    your love I don't want to lose,
    your what keeps me alive,
    don't ever want to lose you....
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    That was good although it was about my father and not a loved one. Your add on was really sweet though.
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