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    I wrote this last month, right after i got with my boyfriend =) I guess it might not be the happiest poem in the world, but i like the ending. enjoy <3<3
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    A silent scream fills my ears,
    Mental, yet unnerving.
    A hostile cry, churns deep within me,
    Tempting but not concerning.

    Complex emotions take my mind,
    Distorting my visions of time
    Dancing in circles, false thoughts deceive me.
    A deluded, un-proportional crime.

    Bright fantasies converge with reality
    Sadistically charming in a way.
    Happiness has become drugged it seems
    Spinning an arithmetical play

    High pitched whistle sends pain through me
    Lies and delusions destroy my memory faster
    Hallucinations crash around me
    My mind decodes the disaster

    Falling through air, spiraling down
    Nothing to grasp, no hope, no sound.
    Life passes by, I watch my ending
    Until which, his hand I found

    A glint of hope, I have grasped.
    Mirages erased, sanity replaced.
    He saved me, rewarded me peace.
    Our fates are now interlaced…

    You're like an angel from a picture book...

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    awesome its perfect everything the rhythm the the flow the compositon and the texture perfectly matches nice one keep on writing
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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    Another good poem of yours. The flow is very nice. It's a really good poem and I love it! (:

    Keep writing.


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