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    It's been quite a while since I've posted a poem, hasn't it?
    Well, I wrote it over the last two days. Here it is! Thank you for reading, I hope you like it. ^_^ *Tsuki*

    Blind

    No longer can I see the beauty in front of me,
    I can only see the ugly.
    Hope was lost in the long battle,
    those around me twitch in fright.

    Headed back home, is there anything left?
    All we have are the clothes on our backs.
    Wonder if the war was truly won,
    or if we fought for nothing.

    Faces of those who are dead,
    are the only things we can see.
    Allies and foes, friends and enemies,
    blur together in our minds.

    Pride is lost forever more,
    we've seen too much for that.
    No family waits for us at home,
    to help set us back on track.

    How can we learn to trust again,
    when we're so use to betrayal?
    Watch your own hide, but never look back.
    Plug your ears from the cries in the distant.

    Tears form in our eyes when we remember the faces,
    of the women and children we killed.
    Innocents living on the land,
    brought down by the onslaught of bullets.

    So many lives gone, but the leaders still live.
    Continue to shoot with blank stares.
    This is where we became blind,
    searching endlessly for the power to control the world.

    Maybe someday we'll be forgiven,
    and our sight will return yet again.
    One person can make such a difference,
    maybe we can find that person.

    So that we no longer cry in our sleep,
    or wake from screaming too loud.
    Someone to hold us and give us hope,
    let us find that person again.

    First it will start with colors,
    then it will move onto shapes.
    After will be faces,
    and last will be the background.

    Someday we may see the background;
    the earth we live on.
    Sight will return when we find that person,
    may god be with us all.

    Some will fall along the way,
    lost eternally to the war.
    But we will fight on until we find our place,
    to live for the lives that cannot.


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    This poem is ......i dont have words for it seriously.
    Such great thougt , imagination , words put together , omg , this is like .... mon i dont have words ....

    And Thanks Suki-chan , you kinda saved my life right now. Cause i am not in a nice mood but after reading to this poem , i feel completely different actually and extremely happy.

    Thanks and love ya for this sis.

    xx
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    And its been a while since I posted in the poetry section, which I'm happy this is the first poem I've read for a while on here because its amazing. Everything about it is great and I really don't need too explain what you should be when you grow up because you must already know with this talent.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Necro'lic Enigma
    This poem is ......i dont have words for it seriously.
    Such great thougt , imagination , words put together , omg , this is like .... mon i dont have words ....

    And Thanks Suki-chan , you kinda saved my life right now. Cause i am not in a nice mood but after reading to this poem , i feel completely different actually and extremely happy.

    Thanks and love ya for this sis.

    xx
    Thank you so much, sis.
    It make me very very happy when someone who's as great as you,
    says something so wonderful about my poems. ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by Hardy
    And its been a while since I posted in the poetry section, which I'm happy this is the first poem I've read for a while on here because its amazing. Everything about it is great and I really don't need too explain what you should be when you grow up because you must already know with this talent.
    ah, geez. Always so kind. Thank you so much.
    I feel as though I never say thank you enough . . .
    But, I still don't think I'm nearly as great as you make me out to be. ^^
    No way could I be a professional.


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    You should believe in yourself more.

    Hard hitting.
    Emotionally sound.
    Great pace and freedom.
    Topical and imaginative at the same time.

    I'd pay to buy this.
    Fascinated by the rain, influenced by the wind. Adventure for fun.

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    inspirational and totally imaginative and freely written love it
    awesome and astonishing keep it up
    ~ai~rox~

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    I am in love with this poem, its like the best one I have ever read, I like poems like that. What you wrote was really touching.

    No way could I be a professional.
    I definitely think you could be. Dont doubt your own abilities because you are one great poet.

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    Ya'll are so amazing. Let me say thank you, yet again.

    Quote Originally Posted by Anime-Prince View Post
    You should believe in yourself more.

    Hard hitting.
    Emotionally sound.
    Great pace and freedom.
    Topical and imaginative at the same time.

    I'd pay to buy this.
    ah . . . I see . . .
    Uhm, thank you very much!
    ^//^

    Quote Originally Posted by ultra_maniac
    inspirational and totally imaginative and freely written love it
    awesome and astonishing keep it up
    The more I read, the more I begin to wonder how I am supposed to react.
    Really. Thank you. It means so much to hear.
    Again I say, thank you. ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by Novak
    I am in love with this poem, its like the best one I have ever read, I like poems like that. What you wrote was really touching.

    No way could I be a professional.
    I definitely think you could be. Dont doubt your own abilities because you are one great poet.
    Seriously? Wow . . .
    Heh. People keep sayin' that.
    One of these days, I'm going to have to believe them and start on my path to becoming a professional. >_<
    But really, it means a lot to hear that.
    Thank you, thank you, thank you. Very very very much.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Yes, I have to say it again to everyone.
    Thank you for reading my poem,
    and thank you to those who replied so far.
    It really means a lot. *bows*

    Oh yea, and I'm pretty sure this is the first time Anime-Prince, ultra_maniac, and Novak have ever replied to a poem I've written. ^_^ Thank you.

    And in case anyone was wondering, I've said thank you a total of ten times without counting the one in this sentence. >.<


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    The flow is really good. It reminds me of those parts during movies when your on the edge of your seat wondering what's going to come next. It's honestly one of the best on animeforum that i've read! Keep it up because I definitely would love to read more of your poems.
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    Keep writing, keep going at it. Poems are one of those things. Either you've got the talent and desire or you don't. You do!
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    Wow, its no wonder you keep writting, you're really getting good at this. I feel like having my own book full of *Tsuki* poems, one for each day of the week. I like this one because it had so much power and emotion carved in. Fighting for our individual piece; we all struggle for that, no?
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    Quote Originally Posted by kisses2 View Post
    The flow is really good. It reminds me of those parts during movies when your on the edge of your seat wondering what's going to come next. It's honestly one of the best on animeforum that i've read! Keep it up because I definitely would love to read more of your poems.
    haha, thanks. I've never thought of it that way.


    Quote Originally Posted by Anime-Prince
    Keep writing, keep going at it. Poems are one of those things. Either you've got the talent and desire or you don't. You do!
    Thanks, I'll be sure to do so! ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by SigmaSD
    Wow, its no wonder you keep writting, you're really getting good at this. I feel like having my own book full of *Tsuki* poems, one for each day of the week. I like this one because it had so much power and emotion carved in. Fighting for our individual piece; we all struggle for that, no?
    Well, it's mostly the ideas come to me, so I write what they say. ^^;;
    And lol. That would be very interesting.

    Indeed we do. Without it, we have no identity.


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    Indeed we do. Without it, we have no identity.
    Well I know what you mean, but I saw it a bit differently. Like the people you mentioned in your poem seemed like they went through something horrible; a war. Their life for a while revolved around a war. And now that its over, they have to be themselves, but they dont know how to start. And therefore they look for a cause; something to look forward to. Maybe some plans or dreams they aspire to accomplish, which will then give them a reason to continue their life. Once they acquire a goal, they'll fight for it.

    I guess I'm kind of overthinking this a little. lol.
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    =] This is one of those well put together poem that isn't seen/ read often. Quote:"How can we learn to trust again, when we're so use to betrayal?" One of the main facts in most social lives. 5/5!

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    Quote Originally Posted by SigmaSD View Post
    Well I know what you mean, but I saw it a bit differently. Like the people you mentioned in your poem seemed like they went through something horrible; a war. Their life for a while revolved around a war. And now that its over, they have to be themselves, but they dont know how to start. And therefore they look for a cause; something to look forward to. Maybe some plans or dreams they aspire to accomplish, which will then give them a reason to continue their life. Once they acquire a goal, they'll fight for it.

    I guess I'm kind of overthinking this a little. lol.
    No, no I understand. That's actually hitting it right on.
    They need something to live for, so they immerse themselves in their hopes and dreams for the future.
    Even if that goal is far away, they continue to move forward towards it.
    In order to truly reinvent themselves.
    Or, that's one way it could be seen.

    Quote Originally Posted by Xieshunnuan
    =] This is one of those well put together poem that isn't seen/ read often. Quote:"How can we learn to trust again, when we're so use to betrayal?" One of the main facts in most social lives. 5/5!
    yay! Thank you for the 5/5 rating! ^_^
    And I'm glad you think that, but I think that it's great so many people have replied already.


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    Great poem sis ^___^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    I love this poem. It has a great subject, beautifully expressed and nicely worded. But i know i've read this poem somewhere before. Possibly in an old poem in AF. I'll never forget the line "Continuing to shoot with blank stares"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirako Shima View Post
    Great poem sis ^___^
    Thanks sis. ^^
    Though I really need to post a new poem . . .

    Quote Originally Posted by Nightixu@hotmail.com
    I love this poem. It has a great subject, beautifully expressed and nicely worded. But i know i've read this poem somewhere before. Possibly in an old poem in AF. I'll never forget the line "Continuing to shoot with blank stares"
    For serious? o.O
    Don't know how that's possible. If I remember correctly, I wrote this the day that we were talking about the Vietnam war in geography class. And then I started thinking about other wars, and . . . yeah. Wrote this. o_O

    Although, I think I have seen that line before. It's possible that it was even me who wrote it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by *Tsuki* View Post
    Thanks sis. ^^
    Though I really need to post a new poem . . .



    For serious? o.O
    Don't know how that's possible. If I remember correctly, I wrote this the day that we were talking about the Vietnam war in geography class. And then I started thinking about other wars, and . . . yeah. Wrote this. o_O

    Although, I think I have seen that line before. It's possible that it was even me who wrote it.

    It's either you, or ultra who wrote that line. Because i remember reading it and thinking how much it sounds like what an old fogey would say.
    And when i think of old fogey, i think of ultra. WAHAAHAHA!!! XD

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