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    Default Not Young for Sorrow.

    Hey everyone. ^^
    Um , this poem is actually about very close incidents which i see in day to day life. Tried my best to capture all the thoughts.

    So i hope whoever is reading this one , likes it.
    Thanks.

    -Necro'lic aka Savage.

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    Not Young for Sorrow

    We are here , but we might disappear
    I see a child's face in the mirror above
    These kids may be buried alive , but they wont deny
    there is difference between a child and a broken laugh as you hear us swallow

    I may have not seen any love , any hate , not a single trace to say
    i have been standing here till these kids fall down to just pray
    I may not define between a child and a cold heart as my own
    But i have seen what's like to lose someone everyday till they dont answer on their own

    So did i cry on this song? Find a grave to call my home.
    Watch these kids getting lost ; they have been tied by their souls
    But didnt they lived enough?

    We are here , but we might disappear
    I see a child's tear in a rain drop from above
    This innocent love maybe gone , they arent young for sorrow
    Know the difference between a child and a broken toy which just followed.

    Always bleak , always weak , a parent here is just like a coward army which will retreat
    I have seen these kids hate as they loved , finding a place to find their lost home
    Where is the safety in their eyes , do drugs before the night starts to ask "why"
    You all have taken what they were , their little hands still shiver
    As they look at me for help , my eyes cried as i saw another death!
    NO!

    So did i stand there for another show? A innocent eye have been covered
    Watch this night of lost hope , tied them to the end of the ropes
    But didnt they had enough?

    I say my prayers for , one last time , closed their eyes , sing a lullaby
    they might take us , free of mind
    Swollen Grave sides , covered tears hide.
    But i will sing this lullaby , till the angels come behind.

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    Last edited by Necro'lic Enigma; 12-27-2009 at 12:35 AM.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    That's a beautiful poem....it really is.
    I don't have anything else to say......so.....

    Good job.
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    astonishing i am speechless
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    Thanks teed for the site info

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    It was a very good poem! Really speaks to you.

    This would have to be my favorite part:


    I may have not seen any love , any hate , not a single trace to say
    i have been standing here till these kids fall down to just pray
    I may not define between a child and a cold heart as my own
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    Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good job!


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    I could feel your emotions reaching out to me as i read each verse. It was truly heartfelt and honest. You have done your job as a poet and a writer for your words told a story and i saw it in my eyes, and the poem brought out your feelings which i felt in my heart. Just be extra careful to ensure that a careless mistake like this not ruin your entire poem.

    Quote Originally Posted by Necro'lic Enigma View Post
    So did i stand there for another show? A innocent eye have been covered

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