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    Default The soldier of love

    I'm standing still on the edge of a metal building
    Looking down from above
    The street looks hard and unforgiving
    But I'm not just anyone.. I'm the soldier of love

    The fall through the air is not what the goal is
    I'd rather save time and already be there
    But as she leans out the 15th floor window
    Something reminds me, it's only air

    This is metaphorical but only by chance
    I live in the moment truth be told
    Emotions aren't to be distorted or enhanced
    To face them pure, is to define 'bold'

    She may not care and I'll accept
    Even though my heart still beats her name
    My cloak now from the rain is wet
    But the water softens the shame

    I step forward regardless and go
    It wasn't to be this time
    I still am charging to hit the floor
    Know something? I'll be fine

    I stand up slowly when on the ground
    This soldier took the dive
    But she wasn't my angel today it seems
    And so today
    It was 'I' who saved my life

    And so I roam from here to there
    Watching the world with awe
    The feelings inside were far and near
    Both amazing, and.. so much more.
    Fascinated by the rain, influenced by the wind. Adventure for fun.

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    *reads in three times over*
    hmm . . . There's something about this poem that pulls me in,
    but I'm not sure what it is.
    I feel the overwhelming need to read it over and over and over again.
    Very remarkable use of words.
    Of course, it's always that way when you write a poem. ^_^


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    Thank you Tsuki. You always say such nice things about peoples poems. You have a knack for them yourself. Most things you read are probably things people wrote after gaining inspiration from your art. So..
    Thank you. :-)
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    Aww, that's so nice! ^_^
    Now, I have the need to thank you as well.
    So, Thank you! =D


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    You're way more than welcome!
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    Wow, I really like it! Love the title too.

    This is my favorite stanza:

    "I stand up slowly when on the ground
    This soldier took the dive
    But she wasn't my angel today it seems
    And so today
    It was 'I' who saved my life"


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    I really like it to, great job and I hope to see a new one from you soon. ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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