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Last edited by Kaisuke7; 01-13-2010 at 03:39 AM.
Maybe it's my computer, but I can't see it.
I say it looks pretty good, the question I have is, did you make this with some type of oil-based paint or chalk? Or, is this all colored in the computer?
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thanks, I did it all on the computer.
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 12-24-2009 at 12:57 AM.
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 12-22-2009 at 01:10 AM.
thats good but try shaping the tree a little bit and the characters hand it doesn't look in composition thats all i can see bird or something dragon like whatever it is its awesome
and if u want to learn how to sketch go on this
www.animecubed.com/how to draw/
I think, you have a trouble with the pose, I like the hair ^^!
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Forgive me, but even by anime's standards your anatomy, especially the heads, are strikingly broken. I suggest trying to familiarize yourself with anatomy first, the approach is up to you.
And may I suggest cleaning your artwork? At least make them "blemish-free". When I say "blemish-free", I mean free of things that may prove to be too distracting (not "disturbing", "disturbing" is usually good in art) for the viewer. To point one example out:
First image: See that half-arched white line on the lower part of the image? I mean, that line between the character's jacket and those plants on the left side. I don't know what that line is, maybe a bird, or maybe just an erasure, but look at where it is positioned - on the area where the penis is located (sorry mods, this is constructive, and I'm definitely not talking about profanity). That being said, one might get the idea that it is pee. And look at the pose of the character, standing up, facing the sky, that adds up to the idea that the character is peeing.
Yeah there are accidental stuff that bolster the visual strength projected by the artwork, but in this case, I don't think so.
I'll let you be the judge on the next images.
Overall, I think you still have room for improvement, I think you're better off with another art style tho... And that's a compliment, so don't get me wrong.
Keep working on it.
Last edited by The Grey Crane; 12-21-2009 at 12:10 PM.
Nice stuff you have there. I'm no expert when it comes to digital media but bare in mind what Grey Crane say's. He's very good when it comes to these things and his constructive criticism is always helpful. Anyway just keep at it and I'm sure you'll improve!
howdja upload this as a pic? did u use somethin like photobucket?
well in this last redhead pic, id say u watch out for the fingers. study fingers carefully because in ur pic theyre a little too long with not much detail to distinctify where they bend correctly.
but the rest is nice
Thanks Lawlieth!!
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 01-13-2010 at 03:39 AM.
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 01-13-2010 at 03:39 AM.
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