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    Default Naotas New thread!

    Hey.

    Well it appears that in the few weeks I was absent my thread has dissapeared... So I'll start a new one!

    So the first drawing in my shiny new thread is this coloured page from Deepest Twilight: Militia Stories. All the characters are o.c's created by me and are from the front: General Grotlek, Mikayla Streller, Corden Shade, Irianna Sylvermoon and Captain Ellena Faria. These characters belong in a manga I am currently trying to write and if I get anywhere with will be posted here.

    Well any comments and crits are gladly welcome so all thats left to say is Enjoy!
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    Whoaaaa... I love it! You always do amazing artwork!

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    As usual , master of detailed and beautiful work and just one more masterpiece (why one , need more) . ^.^.V

    Hope i see much more soon ^_^
    Missed talking to ya btw =D

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    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    Whoa! I love it!!! The facial expressions are great! and the coloring is amazing.
    You better go pro some day!!! =D I wanna read your comics in the future.

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    Hey well thanks for all the support it means a lot!

    Chelly - Good to see you back! Thanks for the comment. When are you going to put up a new thread so we can see some true works of art?

    Savage - Hey. Thanks for the comment. Sorry for being absent a while it's nice catching up with you. Haha the reason for only one is that I shot myself in the hand with a nailgun and have been unable to draw (or do anything else!) untill it healed. There will be more to come though!

    Inna - Hey. Thanks for the comment. Pro..... hmmm probably not. definately not good enough for that. However I will share my stuff here.

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    Nice, i like it
    Get it up, bro
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    Ah, that's really great! ^_^
    I love the sky for some reason. It just fits.

    Wait . . . you shot yourself in the hand with a nailgun?!?
    How'd you do that? Are you okay?


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    omg this art is amazing,the charcters look amazing,i really would enjoy reading your manga whenever your done ^_^

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    Dark light"-HIM

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    Hey. Well its been a while since I last posted any of my little doodles up here so heres one. As always I'd like to thank anyone who's taken the time to look at my stuff. Its greatly appreciated!

    GP.Co - Thanks.

    Tsuki - Thanks. The sky was a pain as I really didn't know what to do with it. Haha Yeah I shot myself at work it was my own fault and the fact that I'm forced to work right handed and have no coordination at all when using my right hand. I'm fine thanks for the concern.

    Pein Sama - Thanks for the comment. I'm working on the manga now so when I get it done it will be put up here!

    Anyway here is a new doodle as promised. Its just acharacter design for general Grotlek. Nothing special but any comments and crits are welcome.

    Enjoy!
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    Seeing you're a good artist, I'll kick my critism up a notch.

    For one, there's no doubt that you're a good artist. You have a good use colour, your anatomy is as good as done and you even managed to have some sort of composition in you work. I can see you've put some thought into it and that the triangular composition really makes your art stand out.
    3 things you've accomplished. Good job. ;D

    However, I'll go in-depth a bit more.
    For one, your colours aren't dark enough. From what I understand you're trying to make the picture 'dynamic' and 'legendary,' but the colours kind of fail in that aspect. The background colour for one reminds me more of a fairy tail, rather than a suspenseful legendary story.
    You also chopped off the guy in front's arm off. It's always much more dynamic to have your front figure do a full motion or even just presenting them thererather than have him cut off. You could 'cut' him off if you have a good reason to, such as placing the title right under him. Then no one would notice, but now it's kind of annoying to my eye.
    The colours on the characters should also be a bit darker. Always keep in mind that what you try to express (anger, sadness, happiness,...), colours will always play a big role. Look at the manga's of Claymore. Claymore is a dark, gory manga and the coloured drawings are so dynamic and so dark, you can feel this manga's not about gummybears.
    Your title, oh god. Sorry to say it, but the way you 'wrote' it, is just ugly.
    Your manga is called 'Militia story,' so I'm guessing your manga will be la Berserk, without all the dark forces etc. Well, I don't see that in your title. The same thing you should keep in mind like the colours, the title gives away a lot. If I were to pick up your manga in the store and look at it, I'd laugh and think: "Is this a parody?" because the typography clearly indicates this is not going to be a violent manga, but your title does suggest it.
    All the rest, the giant DT (I'm not sure what it stands for?) and the "story and art by..." shouldn't be there. They ruin your image. They should be placed somewhere under on the bottom, or somewhere on the top. Anything that disturbs the image, unless it was your intention to do so, isn't good.
    I'm also not sure what that symbol is going there, but if that's going to be the symbol with which you'll identify your manga with, you should portray it differently. Some mangaka put their 'symbol' (take for example Tite Kubo, mangaka of Bleach) puts his flaming skull (the one on Rukia's glove) on the first page of the manga as an introduction. Now you've thrown everything into your cover and it looks kind of messy.
    I'm only giving you this critism because I want you to improve, so don't think I'm raining on your parade.

    But, you're doing a good job. I've seen much, much worse and trust me, you're on the right track if you keep doing what you're doing now.
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    Hey. Well as always I'd like to say thanks to everyone who has taken time out to view my stuff. Its greatly appreciated!

    Redictus: Thanks for the comment. Criticism is great as it is intended to point out an individuals weaknesses and help them improve. No one is perfect and when you point stuff out to them they will realise their own mistakes and try to avoid them next time so thanks a lot for the advice and I will bare in mind what you have said in the future! As for raining on my parade, well I need a parade to start with for anyone to rain on it! I am a very poor drawer and only a slightly better story writer as I know how to spell so you have shattered no dreams at all in this instance by being critical. Please continue using that constructive criticism on me and others though as very often it seems people are afraid to say things for fear of hurting others feelings.

    Anyway here is another littl esketch of mine. Sorry for the poor quality. I was very rushed on it and only spent about an hour or so knocking it together. The characters are Irianna (female elf) and Belrian Von Sharpwit XXIII (male half elf) sharing a rare moment of tenderness.

    Enjoy!
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    I don't get why you other artists rush things. If I want to finish a drawing of mine, I never rush, I take my time.

    Of course if you say: "Oh yeah, here's something I'm working on," it'd be great to show us a sneak-peak of what you're making.

    Your drawing:

    For one, I can barely see the characters. With that I mean, they don't stand out. I know you're trying to say: "Hey, these two are so awesome and the moment they're sharing is so cool, yeh!" but they blend in with the background. I'd even say the background is more interesting because of the branches and snow. The characters are also just 'pasted' on it. It doesn't look pretty imo. It's always a challenge to have your background blend in with your characters, so try to keep working on that aspect.

    And...you...wrote something under the 2 characters? I'm sorry I can't read that.

    Well, art isn't your problem. The problem is your composition and use of your images.
    Not everything is black and white like that.

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    Hey hey hey hey~ Look who's got out fresh again! I like your drawings as usual - man, look at them! The first one awed me...in colours! D8 And, the second one did nothing less. Your latest one actually has a real bg. I'm quite amazed about your idea and how fitting it is. Haha.

    Aye, nice work pal! =3


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    Oh wow you are a very good artist I hope to see more of your work ^^

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    Hey. Well been errant for a while so had little chance to update..... Anyway thanks to everyone who's taken the time to look at my stuff and comment while I haven't been about it means a lot!

    Redictus - Again thanks for taking the time to look and for the Critique. I will try to bear your advice in mind when I get time to draw again! Also thanks for not being afraid to pull your punches as it were!

    Rikumi - Thanks. It really means a lot to me when a pro like you comments on my work!

    Ki Shi - Thanks for the comment. There are more coming I promise.... I just don't get much time to draw between work, work related injury (shot myself again a few weeks back...) and eating and sleeping.

    Well here is a new one I had time to create during my spare time. It's a paneled piece as yet unshaded but I very much doubt I'll get time to shade it anyway so I'll just post it now... As always any comments and crits are welcome. Enjoy!
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