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    Default Waking down, rise to sleep.

    When the money flows, in rivers and streams
    Wet, drenched soaked pieces of paper
    When the guns are buried in the sand
    Full, rusty grain filled metal tubes
    That's where I want to be.

    Screw your wages
    Throw down your arms
    Read only from pages
    No weapons, just alarms
    Reduce desire
    Walk don't drive
    Control your fire
    Be happy with 'alive'

    When the news shows happy stories
    Instead of Labour VS Tories
    When the power stations have less rights
    Than the people inside them
    That's where I want to be.

    "I don't believe you"
    "You don't see me"
    "But it's my right to be.."
    "compensated?"
    "No.. free.."
    Can't see the sense
    In looking just to make sense
    Big bang/god
    I'm happy on the fence

    Man woman
    Animal plant
    Need air & water
    Not a suit & a bank
    Handbags and shoes
    Don't give you style
    Heels can't let you
    Walk over a mile
    Value food air
    And mostly each other
    Who needs the condo?
    When you have friends.. and a lover.
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    nice poem..btw,, have you heard about saucony?, Ive heard they're making high quality comfortable shoes. Please check it out..

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    Poems don't need to be long stretches of adjectives and pronouns to be beautiful and true- to have a sense of flow and emotion - or to give a message.
    Nouns and verbs work just as well, if not better. Straight and to the point, while still staying strong. That is why you're one of my favorite poets on here.
    Thank you so much for writing. I enjoy every poem, if you hadn't already guessed.


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    This poem was really good, just like your others, you're an amazing poet and will remain that way. ^^ Be proud in your poetry and keep writing.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Pure genius. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Great job!


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