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    Inspired by a collage I was doing for my 2-D Design class, I wanted to do a manipulation that looked similar to it.
    I don't really like the stock of the person I used much. It doesn't seem to fit well. I'm thinking of putting a girl there instead. Also the road seems off too.

    The main problem is that I don't really know how to go about this. I'd like some suggestions on what more to add to this piece.




    Oh and this is a large 1280x1024 piece. I just thought it would be more sensible to put up a smaller version since this is just the beginning.
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    The perspective on the road in comparison to the guy is off, for one the guy looks flat and he looks somewhat big on that road.
    Also you need to keep in mind things like lighting, casting of shadows, motion.
    Another thing is that the grass just looks odd...especially on the right, I'm taking that you're photo shopping something else there, but for the time being it looks very odd.
    One thing you also need to be aware of is transitions, between foreground and background, ground and sky, etc etc.
    hm, I'd also suggest to shy away from things like using splatter brushes early on in the process of making a manip. It just clutters the space and you lose an oversite of what you're trying to create.


    Hope some of this helps ;]

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