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    Default Is this a war?

    This one i wrote pretty fast ... i was just mixed up with thoughts so wrote it ... sorry if some of you get lost in between of the poem >.<
    Hope whoever is reading this one enjoys it.
    Thank you. *bows*

    -Savage


    Is this a war?

    Is there a light left? Call me a blind help.
    I cant see you , i wanted to fail you.
    Night is going , dawn is breaking
    Is there a heart left? You call me heartless.

    There is no destiny here , nothing like loving a danger
    We are all cowards , running in last hours
    I cant see you , i wanted to break you
    Kill me without a doubt , i am the one who is down

    You hear this sound? Bow to the master cause i am the only one here left to be reborn
    Crawl , prepare to fall. I am still his lover but still not ready to fall...

    Is there a reason left? My brother is now dead
    I could have stopped you , my image is not you
    Destination , feeling this tension
    Is there a letter left? Burn it with fake love kisses

    There is no hesitation , try to love your danger
    We are cowards , no one wants to move forward
    I cant be you , is this why i am a fool?
    Kill me with a smirk , cause i am the one who is down

    Try to find your own ground. Oh you don't know i never touched the ground before
    Love , is this a war?. I am still wondering what i am fighting for ...
    Fight , till you dont die. Bow to your master cause i am the one you have waited for....

    Now do you wanna fight? Are you feeling alright?
    This is a battleground , a scream without a sound
    Now do you wanna fight? Show me who is right
    This is a war , a live show of jokes just like before

    xx
    Last edited by Necro'lic Enigma; 12-05-2009 at 12:04 AM.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    It was a bit confusing, but in general it was very good.


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    O_o

    thats a strong poem i must say sis ... it hits the message in my head...

    and you wrote this fast? -_-

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    from the first word to the last..a war of emotions...


    - Now! This is it! Now is the time to choose! Die and be free of pain, or live and fight your sorrow!
    - Life is but a passing dream, but the death that follows is eternal.



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    this poem is as clear as day to me Alice,
    the words, the emotions,im glad to see your doing poems again its been a while since i seen your works

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    Different thoughts rushing all over the place. The same kind of thoughts one would have if said person is in an actual war.
    ....

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    Wow that's one of the best poems I ever read....the words are so strong....oh...wow...just wow.....I dunno what else to say..this poem is so good.
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    fantastic use of words great display just breathtaking awesome
    ~ai~rox~

    Thanks teed for the site info

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