kiss

[Megamind's Minion]

i was listening to Enrique when i wrote this poem, Stay Here Tonight

i need you, i need you
please stay with me
i don't know what to do
please hear my plea

i can't go on living
if there is no you
i think i will be dying
if you turn to go

listen, do it tonight
even just this one time
be with me, ease my fright
i'll be fine in a soft rhyme

hear me, i promise
i won't bother you again
just give me one kiss
it will ease my pain

the dawn is here
go now in peace
never look back, never!
i may not hold my peace
and ask again for another kiss

i put an effort on the rhyming..
not my forte...

[*Tsuki*]

I like it, it's very sweet. ^_^

[Teddy2116]

Aw I think its a sweet poem. Kinda make you feel like I can't leave the one you love

[Anime Forum]

Its a pretty cool poem. It didn't blow me away but it earns some nice poetry points. Nice work here :]

[Megamind's Minion]

@tsuki.. thanks, you know i really love it when you comment on my poems...
makes me feel worthy...

@ted.. as usual... i was being melodramatic...
but it was fine since you liked it...

@zap.. ill do my best to make my next poem blow you away...