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    i was listening to Enrique when i wrote this poem, Stay Here Tonight

    i need you, i need you
    please stay with me
    i don't know what to do
    please hear my plea

    i can't go on living
    if there is no you
    i think i will be dying
    if you turn to go

    listen, do it tonight
    even just this one time
    be with me, ease my fright
    i'll be fine in a soft rhyme

    hear me, i promise
    i won't bother you again
    just give me one kiss
    it will ease my pain

    the dawn is here
    go now in peace
    never look back, never!
    i may not hold my peace
    and ask again for another kiss

    i put an effort on the rhyming..
    not my forte...

    ~Howl's Mistress Evil Twin from the Other Side here to save her from further humiliation...

    avenge me!..
    kill kill kill

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    I like it, it's very sweet. ^_^


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    Aw I think its a sweet poem. Kinda make you feel like I can't leave the one you love

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    Its a pretty cool poem. It didn't blow me away but it earns some nice poetry points. Nice work here :]
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    @tsuki.. thanks, you know i really love it when you comment on my poems...
    makes me feel worthy...

    @ted.. as usual... i was being melodramatic...
    but it was fine since you liked it...

    @zap.. ill do my best to make my next poem blow you away...

    ~Howl's Mistress Evil Twin from the Other Side here to save her from further humiliation...

    avenge me!..
    kill kill kill

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