this one and the ones in my signature, 3 are new the first one in my signature is 1 i made years ago, i'm just getting back into the graphics game and wondering if my skills are still good.
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this one and the ones in my signature, 3 are new the first one in my signature is 1 i made years ago, i'm just getting back into the graphics game and wondering if my skills are still good.
Last edited by Yew Neek™; 11-27-2009 at 05:52 AM.
1st one, Its positioning is good as in text is placed well, but i cant tell is the text on the left side or the "Yaw Neek" text is supposed to be the main focal
2nd one, that's pretty nifty, only thing i would change is leading your shapes/boarder on the right hand side blank as the text is barely visible to me atleast and filling the pocket of negative space on the left hand side with your text.
3rd one, Good animation, however i would say slow down the frames and have the frame where the text stops, maybe set that to 5seconds. Other than that its pretty good.
4th one, last one i cant say is to my taste, is the bottom right hand text you focal or is it the lady top right? That kinda of boarder is pretty cool though, i may have to steal that idea >_>
Overall there's some nice stuff :3
keep it up
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i knew the text was gonna come up, for some reason i love doing lil non readable text, i mainly do it for filler and have it bring out a certan officialness in my work,and i feel you on the frames i was debating on having it stay there a while longer. thanks for the advice.
these 2 also. i'm stayin in the photoshop lol, i'm like an artist with his inspiration back.
Last edited by FlashD; 11-24-2009 at 01:50 PM. Reason: Don't double post, use the EDIT button instead.
in the first post, the 1 one to the right looks great.... and in the second post, also the first one... don't know why but it reminds me on some futuristic mech anime O.o
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thx, wow so far so good on the comments....i'll prob be posting more i don't feel like takin a break any time soon.
theres some more.
heresw some more, comment on them critique them, good or bad?
i like them
they all have chartcer to them,and the special effects are brilliant good job
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i touch up and adjust lighting with gif animator instead of photoshop, lil trick i picked up.
I'm just trying to figure out what gave it that grainy effect.
Was that intentional? or just low quality stock?
on that particular 1 stock, i could fix it but i didn't like it that much in the first place so i figure why go back and fix it.
Well the fact that you noticed the error without me mentioning it shows that you're skilled. So just keep up the good work.
yea when i first finished it i noticed and thought about blurring to hide it but then just said screw it cuz i started on the assassins creed sig.
These are really well made. They look professional! Do you also make Wallpapers too?
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hell yea, alot of my graphics i make as wall papers but since i'm still deciding if i should make another site or not i'm just using them for sigs. wondering if i should bring back Kaio-Anime Network, but right now time is stopping me so i'm mainly just hanging on the BB.i've been doing graphics for anime since 97', started out on just dragonball sites. than DBZ than like 99 00 and 01 i opened up too all anime.
heres some ones i made today.
Last edited by FlashD; 12-01-2009 at 06:15 AM. Reason: Don't double post, use the EDIT button or respect the 2 days delay.
ehhh, i think i'm gettin a lil better, a see a big problem with 2 of them but don't feel like fixing it cuz i already have moved on to the begining of tomorrow's work, but tell me what you think of these.
Last edited by Yew Neek™; 12-01-2009 at 01:47 PM.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b15708121254.gif
^ Starting off with the first one, I can instantly say the text within the signature is rather annoying to read. Maybe experiment on other types of texts and maybe even find a matching text to go with your signature.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b157081943cc.gif
^ Basic Text/Basic Signatures/Basic Placement. I like it all though and the purple is really nice.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b1570537dcc3.gif
^ Eh, everything about this signature is off. The texture/color/style is just not placed well. Keep trying on this one.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b157053e454c.gif
^ Same style as the first one? The text is annoying but at least its color really fits into the background of the sig, pretty nice work.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b157052e4540.gif
^ I like the text and the color but the picture behind it is very hard understand. Is it Bioshock? I can't fully tell.
http://www.animeforum.com/image/2217184b15708201685.gif
^ Again with this one, nice texture and stuff like that but the picture behind it is hard to fully see. Maybe work on this one a tad more.
So yea, that's my say in them!
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#1 - it's really well done except the red text, it doesn't fit here, also add a border, OVERALL 8/10
#2 - the render looks pretty strange, at first sight it looks like some block is sticking out of his/her head . Effects are ok but sig is a little plain on the left, also add a border, OVERALL 7/10
#3 - overall it's ok but render stands out a little too much from background, add a border, those pink lines on the left and right doesn't really fit there, OVERALL 7/10
#4 - now this is nice, I really the way you made this spash effects, the only thing I can say is to add border, maybe try to fit some C4D in the upper right and left corners to reduce the empty background there, OVERALL 8/10
#5 - I suppose this one is from Bioshock right? Can't say much about this one coz render fits 90% of signature. You've made some ugly border colors here , otherwise it's quite ok, OVERALL 7/10
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Last edited by Averlan; 12-02-2009 at 05:21 AM.
I merged the both your threads, because there is a one thread per person rule in this forum.
I advise you to also read the rest of the rules right here, to avoid future mistakes.
Sure no problem
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