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    Black and White

    The war begins and the sides are drawn
    One bent on destruction
    The other on construction
    Pick your side and follow your heart
    Be it that your heart says to kill and main
    And embrace the darkness and all it’s pain
    Or go to the light
    Save everyone at the cost of your body
    Give everything for the survival of others
    The two sides of every heart
    Only those balanced can decide

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    I enjoyed reading this one, I wonder why no one left a comment. The title is what threw me off the most, are you talking about how things are seen, like good and evil? Things that are shown in black and white can be misunderstood. I liked how you had placed the rhyming scheme as a ABB style (Reminder, I do not know many poetry terms). I do hope you keep writing, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    this is a very deep poem
    i like the message it sends

    why didnt anyone,comment??
    anyway.....very, good poem strong message and good rhymes to it

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    Are we all forced too comment on every poem?

    Anyways it was a decent poem with a decent flow, wasn't the best nor was it the worst. I liked the feel it had and if you ever wanna post more I'll attempt too comment. Good Luck.
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    hah, yea. We're all forced to comment. XD
    It was a very good short poem; I liked it! ^^
    I hope you continue to write and post and, like Raiken, I'll also attempt to comment. =)

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