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    Hmm . . . it's been a long time since I've posted a poem! >.<
    Well, I wrote this one earlier today. I was actually messing with PhotoShop and started writing in a text box. >.< I'm not sure if it's good, but I hope you like it! Other than that, I don't really have a good comment. -_-
    Thanks for reading, and, again, I hope you like it! ^^ *Tsuki*
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Our Dear World


    Listen to the words of tomorrow,
    not loud enough for us to hear.
    We wonder if we’ll be alright,
    but deep inside we’re filled with fright.

    All they say is how we’re wrong,
    not how to make it right.
    Running in circles
    telling us what we already know.

    So far from reality:
    we’ve lost our purpose.
    Now we live in a world
    controlled by anger and greed.

    Put on a strong front, but cry inside.
    For we know
    how doomed our world has become.

    Watch as the children sing,
    and play their made-up games.
    Such pure hearts and easy smiles,
    we turn our backs on them
    with each step forward.

    Let’s stop for a moment
    and look at our world.
    Look without seeing the bad.

    Because this may be the last time
    when we can say
    it’s beautiful.

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    So truthful. As normal, you write what you feel is around you and I'm glad you do, my great niece. I see nothing wrong with it and find it very lovely. Don't worry when you post one up, we'll always be waiting patiently. ^_^ But please don't give up on writing, no matter what, this is one of your many special talents and you have gotten it to a level where you can do it really well.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    ^^ Thank you great auntie.
    I'll be sure to keep on writing and posting poems.
    *hugs*

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    i like how this poem puts how this world is ran in perspective its nice and sad mostly because "when we lost the eyes of youth and no one told us"this quote from a song would never well fit this poem,good job it may have been a while but you did a fantatsic job

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    I know , a very Truthful poem indeed.
    And its a poem that speaks to you cause this is the very right thing that is happening to our world.

    Nice job Suki ^.^

    ~~~x
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    nice poem, twin ^^
    when I read your poem, I just remember children who live beside the skyscraper. they search for money from they song even their voice.. uh.. isn't nice.. u can find the poor peolpe beside skyscraper.. I'm so touched ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Itachi's Pain
    i like how this poem puts how this world is ran in perspective its nice and sad mostly because "when we lost the eyes of youth and no one told us"this quote from a song would never well fit this poem,good job it may have been a while but you did a fantatsic job
    I'm glad you liked it, but I don't quite understand what you mean by the quote. ^^;; Sorry. >.<

    Quote Originally Posted by .Savage
    I know , a very Truthful poem indeed.
    And its a poem that speaks to you cause this is the very right thing that is happening to our world.

    Nice job Suki ^.^

    ~~~x
    Thank you, I'm glad I was able to show our own world in my poem.
    It's kinda what I was aiming for, but I wasn't entirely sure I reached it. ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by kurai_cho2
    nice poem, twin ^^
    when I read your poem, I just remember children who live beside the skyscraper. they search for money from they song even their voice.. uh.. isn't nice.. u can find the poor peolpe beside skyscraper.. I'm so touched ^^
    Thanks for reading my poem sis! =)
    I'm glad that you were able to relate to it, but that's a bit sad to remember.

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