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    Default One Heart to Hold

    She's holding onto him
    She's holding him tight.
    He's scared to loose her.
    but her hearts out of sight.
    She belongs to someone else.
    And he'll never know,
    How much he meant to her.
    His feelings, he couldn't show.
    He couldn't understand her.
    Miles apart inside,
    hand in hand.
    Feelings seem to subside.
    Holding her heart close,
    protecting herself from pain,
    For her love to him, was merely a game.
    She longs for him in the rain,
    And she cry's for him in the dark.
    She has to let go, her hearts being torn apart.
    She's weaker than she appears,
    but stronger than she knows.
    And I guess this is the way,
    True love, truly goes.
    In this world everything changes except good deeds and bad deeds; these follow you as the shadow follows the body.

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    I had a tear in my eye after reading this. A girl split in half by having someone she is with and someone she wants to be with, the guy not being able to say a word about it because of fear. Sounds sad and lovely at once. Please, keep writing what is in your heart, my friend.
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    Bravo!

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    Nice nice poem. It had a really strong flow and I can feel the pain the author[you] feels. My question is, is this poem based off of you or just a random free write?
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    I really liked this poem. It shows a tragedy of lovers who were torn apart by fate. Its sad but I guess it does happen sometimes. I liked how the poem sounded like a story. It just kept going from bad to worse emotion-ise for her.
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    Very good poem.
    Life is short, Time is long. Spend will.

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    Well written, keep posting. Chuu~
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    i very emotional poem
    it has beautiful rhymes
    this is amazing very good

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    I don't know who you are, and I don't know if you even use this anymore. but this is MY POEM! AND YOU STOLE IT FROM ME, OFF AN INTERNET SITE. THIS IS WRONG, AND DESPICABLE. I'VE BEEN WRITING POETRY DAILY SINCE I WAS SEVEN YEARS OLD, TAKING CLASSES AND WORKING TO BETTER MYSELF, THIS IS WRONG. AND IT IS PLAGIARISM. I WROTE THIS POEM IN THE EIGTH GRADE FOR POETRY CLASS AND IT'S BEEN PUBLISHED ONLINE AND IS IN MY JR. HIGH POETRY BOOKS, I HAVE FRAMED COPIES, THIS IS VERY WRONG, IF YOU WANT TO USE MY POETRY THAT IS FINE, BUT GIVE CREDIT WHERE CREDIT IS DUE.


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    Default Re: One Heart to Hold

    Quote Originally Posted by stsvc02 View Post
    I don't know who you are, and I don't know if you even use this anymore. but this is MY POEM! AND YOU STOLE IT FROM ME, OFF AN INTERNET SITE. THIS IS WRONG, AND DESPICABLE. I'VE BEEN WRITING POETRY DAILY SINCE I WAS SEVEN YEARS OLD, TAKING CLASSES AND WORKING TO BETTER MYSELF, THIS IS WRONG. AND IT IS PLAGIARISM. I WROTE THIS POEM IN THE EIGTH GRADE FOR POETRY CLASS AND IT'S BEEN PUBLISHED ONLINE AND IS IN MY JR. HIGH POETRY BOOKS, I HAVE FRAMED COPIES, THIS IS VERY WRONG, IF YOU WANT TO USE MY POETRY THAT IS FINE, BUT GIVE CREDIT WHERE CREDIT IS DUE.


    SARAH VERONICA CAREY
    Hmm, are you really sure this poem is indeed yours? :/ [and btw welcome to AF, since you just joined]

    Anyways, regardless of being you or @Lord of Death the true author, this poem is really precious, with a very sad and deep meaning, perfectly showing how painful love can sometimes be. The rhymes are very good and I truly loved the last verses.

    I definetely wanna read more poems like this!
    Last edited by Mugiwara-no-Basuke; 07-25-2012 at 10:07 AM.


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