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    Default The soundless snow at the window side

    err... I make this poem b'cause I really want to see snow in Osaka... yep! finally for this year, I'll go to Osaka when it's snow ^^ uh... sorry if I can't make nice poem

    The soundless snow at the window side

    In a soundless world,
    Fluttering down, I was snow

    Something is broken, something is born
    Repeatedly, even fruitless things
    The unstoppable people, the enigmatic people
    Including myself seeing them
    There is no unsolvable problem
    I already know that, but complicated stages make a story up

    If I also only can have only one wish
    In my memories I'll make a book from the beginning and read it at the window side
    Red signs appear on pages and start dancing
    I'm going to follow, there is something strange about me
    This world ends when I mutter about the forbidden words...

    Do I run away somewhere? I don't run away anywhere
    That is the value conscious by itself
    The undiscouraged people, the kind people
    My future was changed by them
    One calls this flowing, potent strength happiness
    I've noticed that, if a vital story was written down as such

    I wish if I had a dream that changes my significance of existence
    The dream leads to my emotion, my affinity, and I stand by the window
    I'm enveloped in silence and still waiting again
    Falling down softly, they are not waterdrops but lonelier particles

    In a colourless world
    I found, you are a star

    I'd like to try having a dream great enough to change my existence
    If I connect it to emotion and empathy, I'll stand by the window
    And as I'm embraced by tranquility, again I'll be waiting for tomorrow
    It falls gently: not water, but a lonelier drop

    In a soundless world,
    Fluttering down, I was snow



    too long huh?? sorry ^^


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    Thats really stupid of me if this is your second poem , and i am reading a poem from you the first time. >.>

    It had nice flow , i loved your imagination , it was so warming.
    And its not bad at all , what you wrote is a hard thing you know , so feel proud , not bad.

    Long? Ha , long or short , a great poem is always enjoying to read.
    So size doesnt matters to me =D

    Post more please ^.^.V

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    @.Savage: lol.. this is my second poem on this forum ^^ I don't have any sense of poem and I can make a poem if I have mood of it or maybe a poemer ghost beside me (huh? lol ^^) err... hehehe.. thanks ^^ I just wondering about snow and when I can go to Osaka when it's winter ^^


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    I love your poem. I don't really mind rhythm or length, since I don't read a lot of poems anyway. But this one has a warm, dreamy feeling.

    It's a great poem. Keep it up. ^^.b
     

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    Wow..that's a good poem.I'm very impressed!
    Keep writing my friend!
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    I simple little thing put into something so beautiful, I do hope you continue writing, my friend.
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    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
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    Its a nice poem, it made me realize somethings

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