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    Its time for me to begin writing poetry once again! This poem doesn't indicate anything about me at all and well its a free write! Comments and suggestions are wanted!

    Should_I_Bow?
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    Should I bow?
    Then and now?
    Should I sing?
    After the soft ring?

    Will you allow it?
    Will you deny it?
    Will you thrive it?
    Will you regret it?

    Should I bow?
    When and how?
    Should I dance?
    Should I take a chance?

    Should I bow?
    May I bow?
    Then and now?
    When and how?

    Well that's pretty much it. I hope you enjoyed it everyone and yes I'm fairly just trying to get back in the poetry ball park here but I believe I did alright.
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    It had a nice ring to it and it was nice to read. I like how you made it rhythmically. However you did rhyme the same word a lot.

    It reminded me of someone proposing based on the first stanza.

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    Wow..that's a very nice poem.It rhyms.Sounds really sweet.
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    Alright thanks for the comments.

    @ Sigma, well that's how I actually wanted the poem adjusted but I'll try to work on that if that would possibly make it look better.
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    Behind the words, I could hear a soft lullaby singing on. A poem in which questions what you think you should do. The person behind the poem must not feel comfortable to just go and do as they think they should and question before doing. Which in some ways is better than just running in and making a full of onesself. ^_^ Wow, are you a pro poet?

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    Great poem. You have a great rhyming and flow.
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    Thanks and no I'm not yet a pro poet.
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    I like the repetition. A lot of poets repeat lines to further illustrate the subject matter of the poem, and I think it works in your poem. To me, the message of the poem is about a key eternal question. Should we passively accept our problems, circumstances, and pressures from society to be traditional or fight them? You the writer are asking us the reader, which path should you choose. Great job!
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