Blank Writting

[ELR]

Blank Writing
Elegant twist here,
Gentle pull there,
Creating something that makes sense,
Every word you write making you tense.
Pencil to paper,
Don't shred it with that reaper.
Trying to write each word in the fight,
Every thought wants to know if it is right.
Now it is time for the readers to take the lead,
Allowing them to write their opinion after they read.

[Artcell]

Wow...that's a good poem!I like it!
I like the last two lines ^^

[IcePriestess]

Awesome like always. I don't get it how can you write it so clear and so difficult at the same time. That's just Talent. I'm looking forward to your next works

Edit: shouldn't writting be written like "writing?". I don't think there should be two t's.

[ELR]

@.Autheria Yes, because thoes two seem to pop out the most from the whole poem. ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend.

@IcePriestess I've seen your work, so don't get too discouraged. I think you do a great job yourself. Thank you for reading and I hope I don't let you or anyone else down with my next one.

[Anime-Prince]

Short, skillfull and totally imaginative.

Well done..

[Rein*]

very crafty, i like it..only one issue and its the first word "elegent" is suppose to be "elegant" but other than that great job;shor and spicie

[ELR]

@Anime-Prince No, I disagree about the imaginative part, just a great person who inspired me, I hope this helps him though. And thank you for reading, my friend.

@Rein *ducks* I need to go back to high school english class, I know. And anything can be crafty with the right inspiration. Thanks for reading, dear friend.

[Bulma1017]

Very Creative!! I really like it!! Nice Job!!

[SigmaSD]

Haha, that sounds exactly what I do when I'm writing a poem. I don't know whether something sounds better than writing it differently. And its almost as if the words are fighting to see which ones survive.

Very creative poem. I liked it.

[_-Anonymous-_]

reminds me a song by H.I.M

i like this poem

[ELR]

@Bulma1017 lol, Once again, it all depends on how you look at it, creative or just plan origanal, in the end, it is all the same to me, thank you for reading this, though.

@Sigma -.- Who do you think inspired this one? Huh?

@_-Anonymous-_ Hmm, I don't think I've heard of H.I.M. Is he any good? And thank you for reading, my friend. ^_^

[Aizen-sama]

man i love this poem,it really expresses what people go throught when they write poetry,again amazing