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    Not about me.

    Me
    Shutting my eyes and enjoying the blade run through my skin
    The deepest cut's another sin.
    Blood
    Dripping from my hand onto the floor
    Making me feel like a *****.
    Open
    Are my eyes as they see
    The blood once mine spilling from me.
    Closed
    Is the door and curtains in this room
    Trying to avoid others in my tomb.
    Squeezing
    My hand into a fist
    Beginning the deepest one on my wrist.
    Black
    Is my blood drying on the ground
    As I begin to lie around.
    Waiting
    For my bleak end to begin
    The light fades and so I grin.
    Death
    Welcomes me.

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    Ooof. Deep in two types of ways.
    I liked it, you had a very strong flow going through out the poem and with a little more practice your poems will be something pros may wanna look at.

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    That poem was pretty good, and it captured your emotions well. It kind of made me shudder when you explained with gory detailed about the narrator's self inflicted pain.
    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.

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    @StigmaSD:
    Haha, not about me. I wouldn't cut to that extent.

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    Quote Originally Posted by XxPantherChickxX View Post
    @StigmaSD:
    Haha, not about me. I wouldn't cut to that extent.
    Yeah I know it probably isn't you. Besides it says so in the rules that readers shouldn't assume that its the author in the poem unless they state it. I'm just saying that the way you wrote it made me feel every cut on the persons arm. I liked the poem a lot.
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    Thank-you very much. I feel very appreciated. -^_^-

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