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    Wink rae's art thread =^o.o^=

    Guh-reetings!

    I haven't been on AF for awhile now, so I decided to make a thread mostly for critique.
    This is something random I did in Spanish class yesterday:


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    Needs nipples.
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    ^ what he says




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    I think it's not that bad at all! With or without nipples, it's good!! Good job I like how you did the faces and they way the body looks it's really good and curvy like a really human body! Not bad I really like it!! Keep it up!!

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    its pretty good, even without the nipples but i think the head is just a little to big for the body. just slightly but thats just me
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    haha ^ just tryin' to keep it clean

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    aww... cool sketch!
    but in her nose is a little bit...... weird...


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    lmfao i love how every post above your second one said 'nipples'


    the second face you drew is a bit chunky.
    but otherwise, dang you're good
    nipples would be nice tho.


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    @Raesama, since you wanted critique, here's my two cents on the first image:

    I strongly disagree with those who mentioned the nipple-adding thingy. Adding nipples would greatly ruin its visual structure. As we could clearly see, the image of the girl does not only -in a sense- lack nipples, it also lacks several body parts as well, most notably a belly button, a cleavage, pubic hair, or vaginal grooves. Adding nipples would only lead to visual confusion as to why it's there and why the other parts aren't. The character is already anatomically balanced in a way that a lot of body parts are present but some aren't, to the point in which an artistic statement is somehow being presented.

    The figure is childlike and vibrant, lacking the body parts symbolic of sexual innuendo is perfect given the fact that the heart is strongly super-imposed on the image. In this work, the image of the heart expresses pure and innocent emotions, its presence and the lack of sexually-implying body parts expresses the triumph of purity over sexuality. Now, it may be unlikely that you intended to have that statement expressed in your work but props to you coz somehow even if it was purely accidental, you did it. Two thumbs for you for the central image...

    This work's got a lot, and i mean LOTS of potential to be really good but it definitely requires some tweaking in order to unify the image thus making it a really good work of art. For example, the gleams on the hair could've been better if you continued on doing it to make it more evident in your work. As you could see, your gleams ignore how the hair of your figures are shaped, that's a good thing but it stopped abruptly on the central image. It would've been better if that gleam continued on to the hair of the rightmost female, much better if the image had more hair for the gleams to run onto thus making the image more unified.

    The leftmost character is better off without the clothes (to be more unified with the central image) and the hand that seems to be leaning on the big head below. The hand leaning thingy might also give the viewer the idea that that big head's nose is right on target on the central figure's behind, see what i mean?

    Overall i think the central image is very good but the rest of the work failed to be more unified. It failed to live up to the potential brought about by the central image. I understand that this is just an abrupt idea that popped out of your mind during your spanish class but if somehow you could recreate this artwork, keep the good points i mentioned and work on the proper placement of the figures and in making the work more unified.
    Last edited by The Grey Crane; 10-08-2009 at 06:46 AM.

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    @The Grey Crane: Wow. Your critique is very much appreciated I understand what you mean about the leftmost character. In my studio class, we're doing t-shirt designs, and if I decide to use aspects of this design, I will definitely do what you suggested. And yeah, I used white-out for the gleams and I wasn't too careful with it so I will try to fix that next time haha
    @bayamesa: I agree with you about the face + its chunkiness. I haven't drawn anime for a while (my school doesn't really allow it... ) and even when I was drawing anime a lot, my faces were always a bit.. deformed to say the least ^^;

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