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    Red face You need to cry

    Hello hi

    I've been thinking of a friend that I left for a reasonable reason..she was a good friend though....A bad person, but a really good friend..
    _________________________________

    I'll make you cry
    dont ask me why
    not for being bad,
    or making me sad
    not for climbing my back,
    not for the faith you lack
    as God's tears are rain,
    yours are chronic pain
    you need to cry
    dont ask me why
    the tears you will shed,
    will keep gathering pieces
    of my heart that you shred
    cleaning out your soul,
    washing away you sins,
    elimenating them all,
    exposing your grin
    Last edited by THE ICE ANGEL; 09-24-2009 at 08:36 AM.

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    I like it. And, I really like the message it's giving.
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    Hmm...simple and nice. I agree , the meaning behind this poem is really good.
    How bout you post some more of your work Ice Angel?
    Hope you do.~~
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    it was very nice..a few spelling error but i like its message...good writing^_^

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    Hmmm. It was overall a nice meaningful poem. A few errors here and there and also the first half of the poem seemed a tad better. Keep it up though.
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    Half rhymed and the other half not. Spelling errors, like Raiken and Rein pointed out. I can feel the sad behind it but also the after effect of the poem, like a release. Keep writing, and please do post more, I have a feeling you're going to do well, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Thank you all.....*cant figure out where the spelling error is* =\

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    This is a very good poem!I like it!
    It goes with me and a friend..who betrayed me...
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    Thanks Prook =D

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    Quote Originally Posted by THE ICE ANGEL View Post
    Thanks Prook =D
    No prob!
    By the way..my name is..Prok..haha,you added an extra 'o'.
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    Quote Originally Posted by .Arthuria View Post
    By the way..my name is..Prok..haha,you added an extra 'o'.
    lol sorry..my bad ^^;

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    really good =)

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    Thanks (:

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