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    Default Hana From A Manga I'm Making. Suggestions?

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    Hmm. It looks nice but it just reminds me far to much of Orihime from Bleach (it might just be me but...). I think its the hairstyle and colour thats doing that so you may want to try and change that just a little. I'm not saying its a bad drawing because its very good. As for creating a manga very best of luck to you. Its a huge challenge not only do you have to draw everything but you also have to create a story, dialogue etc. I look forward to seeing more great drawings from you and reading your manga!

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    she looks simple and cute, if thats what youre aiming for and i agree that she looks like orihime.
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
    btw if youre going to admire me, please tell me who you are, gracias


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    To the first posters, thanks!
    Yeah, I was aiming at someone simple and that you could fall in love with... I need to work on it a little but will probably put up more drawings of other characters.

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    awesome, do you mind telling me what the manga is going to be about?
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
    btw if youre going to admire me, please tell me who you are, gracias


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    That's a great picture ^^
    What I suggest is change the shading of her hair >_<
    Also, you maybe want to add eyebrows and ears on her? xD

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    She's really good, but yeah, I agree with Angelic~, ears and eyebrows would be good.

    I really like the eyes. =)


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    dang nice work cant wait to see more

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    Quote Originally Posted by lilminx View Post
    awesome, do you mind telling me what the manga is going to be about?
    College students that wanted to desperately get out of high school but now want to return.
    They try to act as high school students...
    I might have ruined the plot a bit.


    Quote Originally Posted by Angelic~ View Post
    That's a great picture ^^
    What I suggest is change the shading of her hair >_<
    Also, you maybe want to add eyebrows and ears on her? xD
    Quote Originally Posted by Nariel View Post
    She's really good, but yeah, I agree with Angelic~, ears and eyebrows would be good.
    I really like the eyes. =)
    Thanks to both of you! Yeah I will work on that and then put up the new improved picture.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kaisuke7 View Post
    dang nice work cant wait to see more
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    Good shading.

    Nice shirt design.
    Sure Wish I had a little dvd player on my forklift at work... no, wait, that would be dangerous.


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    Thanks everyone! I appreciate the constructive criticism.
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    wow she looks great and she does look lik orihime ^_^...if u have more please by all means post more

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    This is another one I had done before but, sadly, forgot about...
    Here!

    Upload is acting up, hence the link.
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