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    Default We'll meet again

    We’ll meet where no one can see
    Soft veil of ‘lectricity
    She all soaked in song and wine
    And she drips with love and time

    Each smile held in her hand
    Sings with the fall of sand
    Through the glass that marks the end
    When she will, to mother bend

    We dance ‘neath electric waves
    All dressed up like unborn braves
    You taste my teeth and say goodnight
    All rimmed with the sapphire light

    Soft silence was all that stayed
    While deep blue slow-turned to gray
    All slate-soft I left my post
    While you joined, heavenly host

    The petals they fall and drift
    Through water and off of cliffs
    They fall to lake, where your body lies
    On the shore your mother cries
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    i really like this poem has a very soft feel to it

    "Dark light come shine in her lost heart tonight
    And blind all fears that haunt her with your smile
    Dark light"-HIM

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    Wow..this poem is beautiful!!!*___*
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
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    Wow, this poem is amazing. I agree it feels soft and flows so well.

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    I love this poem. Great use of the symbolism of the electricity and such.
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    I feel like that it's telling a love novel story.........and it's good...^^


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    its really good, i like the way you put in metaphors
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
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    Well indeed , Luzifer has a unique style of writing his poems. Always amazed by it.

    And this one is by far my fav from you. Especially the last two sentences , totally unforgetable.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Sorry I haven't posted on this one yet. Anyways, the poem has a very nice flow to it and it had a well meaning to it. If I had to say, you are not yet ready to publish these poems but your on the right track.
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    Not bad. I was thrown off by the second line, but when I got to the end I realized how that helps it flow. Not my style of poetry, but that in mind, a supurb composition.

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    A perfect change from light to dark. Exquisite detail, and very good rhyming. I just thing that the third line of the first stanza sounds a bit weird. "She all drenched in song and wine"; though I don't know how you could change that.
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    This poem is very amazing. ^^ You put a lot fo feeling in it.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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