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    Faded Existence Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein* has a reputation beyond repute Rein*'s Avatar
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    Comments and critiques are always appreciated and if you decided to just read thats welcomed too


    I talked about you today
    the things I said made me sad
    you don't talk to me anymore

    i feel like i'm not apart of your life
    like you've shut me out
    and the door is chained tight

    I scratch and call but you don't hear
    I shout and kick but nothing gets through
    what else can i do?

    let me in your world
    give me the special tour
    let me see all that you hide

    I can't survive here on the outside
    with you just inhaling me through a door
    Open up and allow me in

    Open up and I'll come in
    To you my love i'll always run
    To you my hope my spirit sings

    I await at last beneath the light
    to peer through latchd doors and
    behold the sight of love's true form

    Open up and allow me in
    Open the doors and let me sing
    sweet lullabies in your ears
    sweet lullabies that can dry my tears

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    Woah....This poem is really nice...really really nice.
    Good job Rein*!^_^
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    Junior Member Dreydor is just really nice Dreydor is just really nice Dreydor is just really nice Dreydor is just really nice Dreydor's Avatar
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    very touching, very moving

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    Nice wrap up at the end *thumbs up*
    I like it, you usually don't write much (at least I haven't seen it) but when you do its always something of pure beauty. Nice work

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    Thanks guys..i appreciate the support

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    Rein a great poem here.. I think you should write part two.. :-D
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    thanks, i'll consider it i guess. i never thought of writing a part 2 but who knows

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    I loved it, but I see places where you could possibly place that could use a comma, but that is my own opinion and you can take it or leave it as it is. I hope to see more from you, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    I agree, sadly the didnt really finish punctuating this poem but i thought you was ok. Thanks for your opinion, feel free to make as many as you wish. i don't mind ^_^

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    Very emotional. You expressed your feelings very well and I could feel the frustration. I liked how you wrote your last stanza as well.
    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.

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    thanks,i appreciate the comment bro

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    I really like!! It has great meaning to it, it's moving and touching. Keep it up! I really like your work!

    "Remember's I say's it out of LOVE!!"
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    Thank you bayamesa!!!

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