Walking in the groove

[LOVE STUFF]

Hmm...I know it's not one of my best poem but please do give some advice and comments.I'm a beginner.

"Walking in the groove"
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When will you grow up?
you said
Without knowing I smiled

People are rotten
you can no longer see
I can't say sorry

But I'm spending my days with you
If you go...
This sadness will keep growing with every step

Today,Tomorrow
What's the point?
You will love me!

You will live and
I will disappear
I can't no longer feel...

Stupid Stupid me
I thought you could love me
I'm so weak

I know, but will you notice for one moment?
Tomorrow is eternal
Now I can see

I love you more than anything
I will fade without telling you but it's alright
I still remember your fragile smile.

[Artcell]

Nice poem..But the the flow of it could have been better cause when I was reading second stanza I couldn't relate it with the first stanza.. ..well,write more and you'll be a great poet one day!

[LOVE STUFF]

Thank you for the comment.