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    this is something i wrote when i was heart broken
    i know its not that well,but i tried my best


    i loved you
    i really did
    i thought you loved me too
    but you flipped the lid

    so now its over
    and i wish it didnt end
    but you showed me what love is
    and what it cannot be

    it cannot last
    it never does
    its just a waste of time
    and it hurts like hell

    even if you long to kiss
    even if you long to touch
    longing never last
    theyre always out of sync

    love is hurt and pain is joy
    in this world of upside down

    in this world of hate
    it happens...
    happens to betray
    Last edited by lilminx; 08-31-2009 at 10:34 PM.
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    ... I want to be the first to say, I'm sorry. Tho its not personally directed to you sis, but to all those who have been hurt out there. Great poem, hit way to close to home for me but its still great.

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    it was very good...a little sad but very good

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    thanks guys and yes as you can see, i was sad
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
    btw if youre going to admire me, please tell me who you are, gracias


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    Not trying to be mean but I believe the first Stanza could of been better. Your last two lines seemed a tad desperate for a rhyming scheme. Other than that you did a decent job, very sad poem and I hope these invisible open wounds have healed. D:

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    i know about the first few lines, but i couldnt find anything >.< and the last line i just put it in randomly but thanks for your honesty
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
    btw if youre going to admire me, please tell me who you are, gracias


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    I'm really sorry...
    I like the poem alot by the way!
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
    ♥♥♥

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    thanks
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
    btw if youre going to admire me, please tell me who you are, gracias


    siggy by teddy thankies ^^


    **UPDATE** NEW DRAWINGS
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    My sweet sweet family is located in my blog
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