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    Okay I tried to write a sonnet..and I know this one is not a good one..!!!!!
    ___________
    Loneliness

    It was a cold and rainy monday night
    Pushed me to the corner and turned off the light
    You stepped out of my world,said"Walk your path"
    Left solitary in my tear bath
    Ever since then I never sang our song
    Did not have the one to point out the wrong
    I found myself childish and pathetic
    Just for your love to be realistic
    And so I never looked up at the light
    My smiles had faded,once upon a fight
    I stayed where you had left me at the first
    A new self has born,who has the love thirst

    So I lead my life like this forever
    This loneliness shall go away never
    Lovely set made by the awesome Arxia!
    Thanks so much girl!
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    Nice Poem.......

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    Well i think different , its a nice poem. I dont know why but this poem is quite something i can relate to myself.
    And words you used in certain sentences were very impressive , i enjoyed reading your poem and its not a bad attempt at all.
    If you keep writing your thoughts like this , you might write some of the best poems i am sure.

    Hope to see more from you.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    awww sis thats a great poem , i really like it
    you can't call me weird, cause im unique ^_^
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