Karu's Jigoku Shoujo wall

[Hautalken]

Wanted to practice using the pen tool more often. So, I came up with this wall. Yea, it look real messy right now and it's going to need some improving. It was 1920x1200 initially, but the size wouldn't go below 1.15 MB after I converted the format, so I sized it down to 1280x800. Also, this took real long to do, but I'm sure it's not finished yet. So I'm going to need help.

Critique please? Oh and once again, DON'T put up replies if you have nothing else to say other than "yea it's good" or "I like the colors". It's annoying. I'd only like replies that are going to help me improve.




Extract by .Lovebeat I think ^^;

[Famahama]

Oh wow. It looks pretty good on my desktop too, woot!

I love what you did with the patterns. The grungy/ vintage colors works well too.

Anyway, I think you can improve those little circles above the top shape. Try modifying it a more constantly-changing opacity/size, solid near the focus, faded at the end. Makes the focus more easily noticable :3 Also, perhaps you could change the image at the bottom right, the mouth is kinda disturbing imo >_>

[nenuma]

I really like it. The background goes well with the extract.
Im not a pro. so I cant really critique you on this one.
=3

[Hautalken]

Thanks Unli!

I had tried doing that to those circles. But I had to edit -.- I'll work on them again. And the mouth troubles you, eh? np :3 I'll take it out!

[wizz-o-matic]

What's wrong it being 1MB? ... In my old days I had over 3MB for wallpapers.
Nowdays 1280x800 is just too small ...

Edit: that blue "sparkly" thing over the char is out of place ...

[Hautalken]

It can't be over 1 MB because Muz0NaZ won't let me submit something as large as that.


Uhh...well he never used to anyway >____>;

[Hautalken]

Edited the round brush things in the side, removed the mouth from the side, and erased the C4D a bit.


Anything else?