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    Post Doubt and Trust translation

    Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/dgr...bttrustegg.htm

    ...There are mistakes with grammar, spelling and such. So as not to give the wrong idea to people who view the lyrics:

    Example: [Desiring dazzing to change everything.] I think he means 'dazzling', but I don't know how it'll make sense even after that.

    [and to believe in your pain and guilty]: and to believe in your pain and guilt.

    [Without bothering about what you may loose]: I think he means lose?

    [I'll continue to call the shadow of desire called dream]....some of the sentences are just phrased in a weird manner, and the meanings might get mistaken, so I suggest someone looks into it...


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    Not only is the grammar horrible but there are some actual translation mistakes too.

    The person who submitted this hasn't come on for a long time so I might as well scrap it.

    btw I was wondering, do you wanna change your subdomain name too?

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    Subdomain name? What's that?
    But okay, change it.

    I've also noticed that there are some mistakes in the transliteration for this song, and some of the remaining D.Gray-Man ones. Also one more for Bouken Desho Desho that I didn't post, because I only found it out later. When you use the lyrics to sing it really affects the rythm and such...then it becomes noticeable.
    Last edited by 玲華.; 08-19-2009 at 04:37 PM.


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    *facepalm* Why do so many people don't know what a subdomain is...

    natsunoame.animelyrics.com

    ^ what do you want it to be changed?

    For the rest of your corrections, yea just mention what you found.

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    -smiles-
    Change it, then...people won't know me by my old name anyway.
    Oh-kay, this is what I found for [Bouken desho desho] and I think it's the last one.
    Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/har...kendeshode.htm
    [odoro kasete odorite egao ni narou] when it should be "odoro kasete odoroite egao ni narou", the kanji shows it. And "susundeku" is misspelled...

    Okay, on to Doubt and trust.
    Throughout the romaji, it is written as [Hikaru no moto], when it is supposed to be "hikari".

    I'm not sure if it should be [zenbu] or "zembu"...

    In the first chorus, what should be "fureta" is [furereta].

    In the second chorus: [hikari ga yumi wo unnde] where it should be "yami", and there's lots more mistakes.

    Gahhhh...the whole thing's really irregular; the phrasing's wrong in lots of parts, where terms like 'wo' are joined to the words; I just feel like redoing it. =__=
    Can I? :3


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    *headdesk* no what I'm trying to tell you all this time is what do you want your new subdomain to be? You've been asking for a new nick, even one different than what you have now so I dunno if you actually wanted that one instead of riiko or something.

    People who submit typos in lyrics should be stabbed. *stabs himself anyway*

    Yea go ahead with your own full translit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AzureDark View Post
    *headdesk* no what I'm trying to tell you all this time is what do you want your new subdomain to be? You've been asking for a new nick, even one different than what you have now so I dunno if you actually wanted that one instead of riiko or something.

    People who submit typos in lyrics should be stabbed. *stabs himself anyway*

    Yea go ahead with your own full translit.
    *headwall* -smiles dizzily anyway-

    okay, change it to rei.animelyrics.com; I wanted that name but it was taken, typically.

    why're you stabbing yourself? *horrified expression* the blood's running onto the floor D8! But that's why the lyrics correction forum was set up, no? Making full use of it. 8D

    Okay, so here's the corrected translit:

    Doubt & Trust owari mo miezu hashiri nukeruyasuraki tooku sugata mo nakukodoku wo fuujikomete tozashi kakeru manazashi habataku mono wo mukaeru sorashihaisareru no wo osore ya shinaiakogareru mabayusa wa subete wo kaeru tame ni dare mo yurusazu ni doko e yukerudarou? hikari no moto yami wa umareshinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yurerukokoro wo tsukisasufureta yoru wo koorasete moyume to yuu yokubou no kage wo yobitsuzukerukimi no tsumi to itami wo shinjite yuku zembu hoshii to sasayaku koenakushiteku ni oitsukezu nisaki made motomeru yubi tsumetasa ni kizukanai ai wo nokosu nara tometa kuchibiru ni hikari dake ga yami wo unndenukumori wa utagai wo kasanetetadoritsuku omoikawasu mune ni chikau mono gaeien no kizu de kamawanai kizami tsuketetoki ga kizuku hazami ni kieru mae ni hikari no moto yami wa umareshinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yurerukokoro wo tsukisasufureta yoru wo koorasetemoyume to yuu yokubou no kage wo yobitsuzukerukimi no tsumi to itami wo shinjite yuku


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    Huh please put them in proper lines and stanzas...

    Oh, and rei.animelyrics.com is also taken on the site because of a sempai of mine >_>

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    Quote Originally Posted by xRiikox View Post
    *headwall* -smiles dizzily anyway-

    okay, change it to rei.animelyrics.com; I wanted that name but it was taken, typically.

    why're you stabbing yourself? *horrified expression* the blood's running onto the floor D8! But that's why the lyrics correction forum was set up, no? Making full use of it. 8D

    Okay, so here's the corrected translit:

    Doubt & Trust owari mo miezu hashiri nukeru yasuraki tooku sugata mo naku kodoku wo fuujikomete tozashi kakeru manazashi habataku mono wo mukaeru sora shihaisareru no wo osore ya shinai akogareru mabayusa wa subete wo kaeru tame ni dare mo yurusazu ni doko e yukerudarou? hikari no moto yami wa umare shinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yureru kokoro wo tsukisasu fureta yoru wo koorasete mo yume to yuu yokubou no kage wo yobitsuzukeru kimi no tsumi to itami wo shinjite yuku zembu hoshii to sasayaku koenakushiteku ni oitsukezu nisaki made motomeru yubi tsumetasa ni kizukanai ai wo nokosu nara tometa kuchibiru ni hikari dake ga yami wo unndenukumori wa utagai wo kasanetetadoritsuku omoikawasu mune ni chikau mono gaeien no kizu de kamawanai kizami tsuketetoki ga kizuku hazami ni kieru mae ni hikari no moto yami wa umareshinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yurerukokoro wo tsukisasufureta yoru wo koorasetemoyume to yuu yokubou no kage wo yobitsuzukerukimi no tsumi to itami wo shinjite yuku
    oh. huh. therefore change it to riichan.animelyrics.com...if that's taken too I've nothing to say ._.

    darn, the site messed the stanzas up. So I'll just have to re-do it. here are the wrong parts, anyway:

    In the second line [yasuraka tooku sugata mo naku] should be "yasuraki"

    [shihaisareru no wo osoreya shinai]: I have a feeling that the "ya" is meant to be seperated.

    [daremo yurusazu ni doko e yukerudarou?]: 'dare' should be seperated from mo and yukeru from 'darou'. It's the phrasing, words aren't the same if they're messed up, or they don't exist at all.

    [hikaru no moto yami wa umare]: hikari.

    [kokoro wo tsukiasasu]: tsukisasu.

    [furereta yoru wo koorasetemo]: fureta. And the 'mo' is seperated.

    [ hikari dake ga yumi wo unnde]: yami.

    [hikaru no moto yami wa umare]: again, hikari.

    [kokoro wo tsukiasasu
    furereta yoru wo koorasetemo]: the same mistakes were made here as in the first stanza.


    So I'm done










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    No, just add a .txt file as an attachment...

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