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    Ok first off I'd like to thank Tsuki for helping me. She told me to write so I did. hope you like it

    I know you're waiting for me
    Silently, holding back the tears from falling upon your face
    I know it must hurt
    Longing for someone you love to return to you
    I wish I could ease this pain that you're feeling
    Yet, I can not
    I can't bear to face you
    You told me countless times that its ok,
    That its ok to be afraid and that you will be waiting for the time when I'm ready
    Idiot...
    That word plays repeatedly within my mind
    I'm such an idiot
    Why am I afraid to return your feeling of love?
    Why am I not strong
    Why am I not the man that is portrayed when you see me
    I don't deserve you
    That much I know now
    Yet, I can't bear to lose you to someone else
    Please, I want to be that man that you see
    I want to return the feelings of love to you
    Please I want to become the man of your dreams

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    Another poem from you, and its just as great as your other one, but this one is even better. It has a nice flow to it and I understand it very well. Your not so bad at poetry you should continue to write more.

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    another smash hit...i lik eit very much..the emotions remind me of things with which i'm familiar..i enjoyed reading it..looking forwar to more of you're work

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    gah.
    I didn`t really do anything. >_<
    You`re da one who made it awesome, bro.

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    Thank you Rein and Novak, as long as people like my writing I'll keep writing or at least try to (grr writer's block)

    Sis you did help so there :P

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    Tsuki, he might be right, everyone has something that inspires them, whether it be a person, or an object, a part of history, or a book that had been read. I enjoyed your poem slash story. A confused heart was behind it, wasn't it? Lovely as your writting is, I hope to find more that you have written, my great nephew. ^_^
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    I agree with everything Rein* says!
    *cheers from the side lines*
    "keep writing!" c[x
    I would like to apologize ahead of time for my poor English. I'm sorry u.u;

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    Wow. I love that one. As if the character depicted in the poem is afraid to love although he really wants to. I hope to see more of your works soon. If I have time tomorrow, I would read this again. n_n daily if I can. I would!!


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    Quote Originally Posted by akira.yuki View Post
    Wow. I love that one. As if the character depicted in the poem is afraid to love although he really wants to. I hope to see more of your works soon. If I have time tomorrow, I would read this again. n_n daily if I can. I would!!
    O.O
    uh... I'm kinda speechless, I mean.... thank you....

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    Hmm...i think it was nicely imagined and put into words. The idea and the meaning behind it , was really sweet and somehow with full of power that you wanna be that guy for her ...^^

    Nice job. I am gonna read more from you.. *runs away* ~~
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Thank you, really it was something I wrote for my friend when she was feeling down. I'm glad you liked it and hopefully I'll find something else to write about

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    Quote Originally Posted by Teddy2116 View Post
    O.O
    uh... I'm kinda speechless, I mean.... thank you....
    ahaha.. xDDD It's a comment you deserve...

    so nice reading it again.. n_n

    for a friend? wow... you mean it's not based on experience... o.O It's really good to see people who doesn't need experience to understand person. thumbs up


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