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    Default Moments.

    Moments.

    The sound of your voice sings to my soul in waves of happiness.
    Your heart is my cage of sweet paradise within this world.
    I close my eyes and see you there in glows of radiant light.

    Take my hand and lead me to your soul of tranquility.
    Limbs of sheilding encase me sending me into spirals of bliss.
    The beat of your heart melds my own in pools of emotions.

    Fingertips frolicking tenderly along your body in even strokes.
    I whisper your name to the wind hoping it would echoe.
    Eternity of your soft embrace would dine my heart with gladness.

    Take me into your wings of protection and never let me go.
    Flowers of bloom cascade in the rays of the sun all around us.
    You are the light that saves me from falling from heaven.

    Your every touch sends my mind into a state of peace.
    My arms ache to hold you when I wake from a dream.
    You shelter me from the cold grip of loneliness.

    I give you my heart to hold and cherish in your hands.
    Eruption of melodies subdue the fear of loosing you.
    I close my eyes and hold you tightly in my arms.




    "When you turn and walk away you don't hear me say."

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    i like this peom..........sorry i cant be more specific im not feling well today

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    Wow that sounds so incredible. I like the perfect imagery and how it further portrayed this love of yours as something heavenly. And most of the things are so true, love does help you from falling and also help extinguish any fears.

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    Loving it! The poem is very deep and full of meaning. I most likely can't say a paragraph worth of stuff so let me end with the sentence - Great poem, keep it up!
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    Marvelous.
    I was captivated by the name,
    and knew it would be a great poem.
    But not until I read the last line,
    did I know how great it would be.
    The tender feelings of the narrator were beautifully shown, and brought to life in the large vocabulary.
    It was not a simple, "I love you", but an "I love you" spoken in many different ways, all wrapped together in an amazing poem.
    And now that I am done being mushy, let me congratulate you on a job well done.

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