Densuke, looking for advise

[iDensuke]

hey, just posting recent work, tell me how i can be better please



check it yo

[Kaisuke7]

damn man this is some of ur best work u should color this. Your style is very instresting

[kurai_cho2]

cool styles! I hope I can draw male character like that!

[Tsundere Works]

Did you sketch this? [Or lineart in a program?] If you did, this has got to be the cleanest sketch I've ever seen.

The lines are very smooth.

[iDensuke]

Did you sketch this? [Or lineart in a program?] If you did, this has got to be the cleanest sketch I've ever seen.

The lines are very smooth.

i inked it by hand after my pencil work

[Doctor One]

Large head, narrow hips. But it's not so extreme that it's wrong, I mean he's got the proportions of Bill Mahr.

[FirebornX]

Yeah I agree with Shedra that to my eye he looks like he starts large in the head and shoulders and tapers off near the bottom.
His shoes also look flat to me.
However, also as Shedra noted, it's not so far off that it's totally wrong. It may just be your style and if so it works.
The guy looks good, and BTW props on the inking. I'm always so nervous hand inking that I somewhat screw it up and end up cleaning it up in the computer anyway...

[Erisa]

Your pretty good!
Keep practicing and you will be a pro

[chuunin7]

I love your style.. It's unique.. And you can inked your sketch! Something I CAN'T do.. Make me feel a bit jealous.. >,< And for some suggestion, his arms is too small.. Make it bigger, so he will be more macho(?) >> is it the right word? Hope you understand what I mean.. XD his lower part of the leg is also too small.. Hey, the shoes you're drawing is cool.. Hehe-

[iDensuke]

I love your style.. It's unique.. And you can inked your sketch! Something I CAN'T do.. Make me feel a bit jealous.. >,< And for some suggestion, his arms is too small.. Make it bigger, so he will be more macho(?) >> is it the right word? Hope you understand what I mean.. XD his lower part of the leg is also too small.. Hey, the shoes you're drawing is cool.. Hehe-

heey, thanks for the support, the comment was helpful and flattering =) hope i can return the favor so go post yo

[tsukinowa]

really nice i think you deserve an EXPERT
the body is nicely drawn and the hair as well.. but the face needs some re-draing to make it look more perfect
^_________^

[Tira Misu]

Hi Densuke, great work.

I just wanted to remind you about the one thread rule. I know you have had the other threads you started closed and then started new ones, but I would prefer you just had one thread open where everything goes rather than deleting and starting new threads repeatedly.

If you have any questions feel free to pm me.

-Tira

[iDensuke]

Hi Densuke, great work.

I just wanted to remind you about the one thread rule. I know you have had the other threads you started closed and then started new ones, but I would prefer you just had one thread open where everything goes rather than deleting and starting new threads repeatedly.

If you have any questions feel free to pm me.

-Tira

sorry, the reason is cuz i just wanted a new title and i was having trouble changing my other thread title so i was only gona make this one more, but i wont do it again. thanks for the friendly reminder =)

[iDensuke]

just posted some new stuff

[SleuthehSocks]

Your stark white/black contrast is a unique style! I'd say work on proportions and angles.

[iDensuke]

Your stark white/black contrast is a unique style! I'd say work on proportions and angles.

what proportions do you think are incorrect?

[SleuthehSocks]

what proportions do you think are incorrect?

The one looking over his shoulder; Perhaps the right eye behind the nose is a smigen smaller and the mouth angles too much like ">". I'm not trying to be mean, just picky.

[iDensuke]

The one looking over his shoulder; Perhaps the right eye behind the nose is a smigen smaller and the mouth angles too much like ">". I'm not trying to be mean, just picky.

yah, i noticed about the eye =/. but hey, im better from it! but no ur not mean, i want you to tell me how can be better so thank you =)

[Taikyo]

hey, just posting recent work, tell me how i can be better please



check it yo

well, not bad really. :3

The arm needs some work, and your shading too. Just remember as the shadow goes far away from the object it's cast from, the lighter it gets. Also the hair is a bit off..^^; (front view)

Good luck!

[iDensuke]

well, not bad really. :3

The arm needs some work, and your shading too. Just remember as the shadow goes far away from the object it's cast from, the lighter it gets. Also the hair is a bit off..^^; (front view)

Good luck!

ah, thank you for the advise. i will most definitely get better

[iDensuke]

new posts =)

[Deathfinderxx]

Some helpfull advise: Work on your eyes,Work on your neck at front-view,work on your top of your head looks alittle squished, and finally work on your mouth. Other then that its fine.

[iDensuke]

Some helpfull advise: Work on your eyes,Work on your neck at front-view,work on your top of your head looks alittle squished, and finally work on your mouth. Other then that its fine.

elaborate more on what you said please, specifically about what you said about the top of your head please and thank you =)

[Kaisuke7]

nice nice i like it ur pro at the neck man, i this it's a pretty cool style.

[Morgane]

Cool ! I love your style ! I draw too but not as good as you ! You're really an artist !