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    Default Some help with a e-mail translation

    I am helping my friend with a translation of a letter to Enterbrain, he has to e-mail them in Japanese. I have translated his message, but I want to make sure it is grammatically correct before sending it to him.

    Here is the Original Message:

    Hello Enterbrain,

    I heard that there is a new "RPG Maker" being made. What are the features, and when is it scheduled to be released?

    Thanks in advance.

    Here is my translation:

    こんにちはエンターブレイン、

    新しいの「RPGツクルー」に産生は私が聞きました。フィーチャは何になりますか、そして、予定日は何をで すか?

    前もってありがとうございます。

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    this is what i have translated. from the japanese you have put, I know it's not much, even though it still has a bit of japanese in it the translation.

    '' I asked hello enter brain, new [RPG Tsukuru] the production. What the feature becomes and thank you for any をですか beforehand on a due date''
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    The e-mail you have there would probably be understandable but would come off as very unprofessional and slightly rude.

    I took the liberty of re-writing it:

    こんにちは、

    突然なメールで失礼いたします。

    私はNameと申します。Placeにすんでおります。新RPGツクールについて知りたくてメールしてみま した。もしよろしければ、今度のバージョンアップの新機能について知りたいんです。そして、もし発売日はも う決まっているならそれも聞かせていただければ幸いです。

    よろしくおねがいいたします。

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