Hey this is my first wallpaper which I tihnk looks good could I please get some feedback. Thanks in advance for your time
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Hey this is my first wallpaper which I tihnk looks good could I please get some feedback. Thanks in advance for your time
OOps the link was mest up :^_^: heres the right one.
its fine, but i think you should keep working on it, i dont really like the separation between the circle and the rest on the backgr, and the text's coloour doesnt go too well with the rest, try brown
anyway,like i said, its good but keep working! :P
ow, dont listen to the brown idea- its bad, but try another blue, less flashy
Thanks for the comment I'll be sure to fix it up
I have 56k and it took me 30 mins to load the first half of the wallpaper. Until you compress it into something that takes me 30 seconds, I'm not going to bother looking at it.
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ok I don't really know the big round sphere have any effect on the characters but you need to clean the blue coated guy up a bit I could still see specks of white and also by his hair. I don't think you need that green globe unless you transform it a bit more. Color wise the green is different.. I could see a red shade in the wall to compliment the guy in the red coat. It's a good start on the wall. keep it up and your on your way.
well i think the webpage url is bad placed and the characters should be more up ... remember the task bar ... and the characters doesnt look sooo good ... maybe use another pic ... and ... i dont want to sound rude ... but i dont think thats your first wallpaper ... maybe the pictures and the page url ... but i guess your are a genius at background making ... or you have stolen that background from somebody else ... thats what i think
<span style='color:red'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'><span style='font-family:Courier'><span id=\"618b7602591fe96996a4039c24957108\">Bokomon ARMY</span></span></span></span><SCRIPT language="JavaScript">animate('618b7602591fe96996a 4039c24957108', 'Blue');</SCRIPT>
Im pretty sure thats a stolen bg. Either that or he copied a tutorial to an exact match. Your site URL is... Clashing, for lack of a better word. Back to the drawing board IMO. And try to use your own work.
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not too shabby.
i know for sure that i couldn't make any better.
but practice makes perfect.
and hes right, compress it down in size.
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