AnimeGalleries [dot] NetAnimeWallpapers [dot] ComAnimeLyrics [dot] ComAnimePedia [dot] ComAnimeGlobe [dot] Com

User Tag List

+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: You and Me

  1. #1
    Member Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl's Avatar
    Gil
    1,860.00
    Gender
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    06-19-2010 02:16 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Location
    United States
    Age
    22
    Threads
    7
    Posts
    93
    Rep Power
    184

    Default You and Me

    You and Me

    What will they say, when they find out?
    What will they do?
    More importantly, what will WE do?
    We're not supposed to be together

    We shouldn't be in love with one another
    And yet, here we stand
    Beside each other
    Trying to hide our love from the world around us

    Why is it that our love is not considered love?
    Is it wrong?
    A sin?
    A disgrace?

    When did we enter a world where love is so wrong?
    Where you have to hide what you truly feel in your heart
    Though somehow our love feels right in my heart
    And so, I'm going to follow it

    And I know it'll lead me back to you
    We'll stand strong together
    Side by side, back to back, and hand in hand
    Just you and me

    Forever...


    Notes: Ok, this is dedicated to some of the most beautiful people I've ever come across. I won't say who they are here. But they've inspired me so much. This poem is about loving someone of the same gender as you.
    Love is love. Regardless of gender. And that is it. Sorry if this annoys some of you.


    'All I want, is for someone to accept me, as me.'

  2. #2
    Senior Member kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16 has a reputation beyond repute kajikun16's Avatar
    Gil
    10,580.14
    Gender
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    07-09-2011 03:26 AM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    somewhere over the sky
    Age
    21
    Threads
    5
    Posts
    1,033
    Rep Power
    567

    Default

    a nice poem about a forbidden love keep up the good work

  3. #3
    Ellxeeva's Minion SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD has a reputation beyond repute SigmaSD's Avatar
    Gil
    87,592.99
    Gender
    My Mood
    Sleepy
    Gifts Luna Cake Lie Soras Keyblade
    Mentioned
    82 Post(s)
    Tagged
    1 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    09-11-2014 11:59 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    In your dreams. =0
    Threads
    147
    Posts
    5,959
    Blog Entries
    118
    Rep Power
    6147
    Gamer IDs

    Wii Code: 1596-5790-7816-3407

    Default

    Well it's not really clear that this is a love between people from the same gender, so maybe you should write something that says so if that was the point of your poem. When I read it, it made me think that one person was ashamed of their love, which hurts a lot if that was the case.

    I like your writting style and if flows real well. I like how you express the emotions as well and it was nice reading it.
    If Minecraft had a Japanese intro.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=H5qFZjuKet4

    |Set made by Neukifly|

    Super Saiyan Dango


  4. #4
    Member Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl has a reputation beyond repute Akatsuki_Gurl's Avatar
    Gil
    1,860.00
    Gender
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Latest Post
    06-19-2010 02:16 PM
    User Info Thanks / Tagging Info Gifts / Achievements / Awards vBActivity Stats
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Location
    United States
    Age
    22
    Threads
    7
    Posts
    93
    Rep Power
    184

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by SigmaSD View Post
    Well it's not really clear that this is a love between people from the same gender, so maybe you should write something that says so if that was the point of your poem. When I read it, it made me think that one person was ashamed of their love, which hurts a lot if that was the case.

    I like your writting style and if flows real well. I like how you express the emotions as well and it was nice reading it.
    Thank you for the constructive crit Sigma! Much appreciated! I'm also glad you like my writing style. ^_^


    'All I want, is for someone to accept me, as me.'

+ Reply to Thread

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

     

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts