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I really need your comment from your deepest heart (b'cause if I wanna hear my frenZ comment, they always say 'hmmm... good' without any expression T_T)
hmmm... good. haha just kidding, but they really are good, to an extent. the wings look like theyre comng out the back of the girls head, the guy with the cards looks good, especially the detail on the hair, and the girls in the rain is fairly simple. but the girls turned back with her back in view is good, nice abgle and body language, and my fave is the two people sitting together drinking and reading, excellent poses to show friendship between characters. now, to make it look better just start adding little details to ur work. simple stuff, like a nice belt or some design on the clothes, keep em coming yo
Your limbs are very thin dear. Compare the thickness of your arm to your head, (you will look silly when doing so). And work from there. And remember that the elbow is thicker then the rest of the arm.
Other then that, your clothes need more wrinkles.
I hope that helps.
AMETUER???!!! This looks like Picasso should be worshipping at your feet This is really good and I really mean that!!! You draw better than me and lots of people keep telling me I'm good, they should check this out.!!
You shade really good already keep it up. these are pretty good i like the 3nd one the figure is the most correct, the others the anatomy is a bit strange, demo keep at it thought love to see more.
They all look very good but could work on body proportions on the girl with the wings.
waw... so many people give me praise and suggestion ^^ well I will keep on GANBARE to draw well hho^^
ehem... I have another sketches. plz give me more suggestion ^^
whoa! im really liken the one cut diagonally, did u just put extra effort into it? try to do that all the time!
Wow that new set of drawings looks sharp!
I like the kind of chibi-ish style you have going with the 1st drawing / group of characters and the babies.
The face study is interesting as well. However, I would suggest that you do it with different heads to familiarize yourself with how each character's face is unique.
I really like the dual bust / last drawing it looks crisp and very professional. I'm extremely impressed.
But I do notice that from your first set of drawings to your second that a lot of the problems you had, with proportion and other things, have pretty much been eradicated. Forgive me for the question but did you use existing professional artwork as drawing references?
I solemnly swear I am up to no good.
You pretty darn good
Just look up human anatomy things
and practice practice practice!
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Honestly the first and last pictures are bad in my opinion and they leave much to be desired.
However the middle three are much better. I love "Winter" and "Daisuke-kun" the most, the concepts are nice and the anatomy much better.
A girl could be better anatomy wise, also the hair is too stiff it should flow more and have some strands away from the rest.
As for the second batch of pictures:
In the first two pictures the heads are all too big like they are chibi versions of what you inteded them to be without being chibi at all, a common mistake and habbit that is easily broken once you realize you are doing it.
The expressions on the third pic are nice, but basic an ameturish, try to put more detail into eyes as characters they should be something specail about the eyes that makes them a focal point of the face and reveal how the character it. Intense eyes for serious or angry characters soft gentle eyes for gentle, nice, quiet, clutzy characters and then there's an inbetween area, its not something that can really be taught per say you learn how to fit things like that together through trial and error.
I love the fourth pic, it's concept is good and it's executed nicely simple yet still intricate enough to be attractive to look at. and the heads are a good size the emotions fit.
Overall you're fairly good, I look forward to seeing more, keep it up.
Sig and avy by me.
"If looks could kill you'd be the one that takes my world and makes me numb."
Amateur? Psh, yeah whatever. They're great! You just have to work on the eyes a bit. Look at some work from manga authors and see how they do their eyes then try copy some different styles until you can find one and make it your own. But these are very well done!
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☆*゚ ゜゚*☆*゚ ゜゚*☆|Sigma★|
|Kaitou$|Daken :'D|Neuko's Pokemon Trainer|
|AF onii-chan: Jump_for_Luck||dark_butterfly's mommy|
|Elphaba's Penguin|Proud daughter of Aleyna and Anuket|
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Either way, you're doing great! ^^
It's hard to make your own sort of style first up so good luck with future drawings!
Keep practising~ =D
Set by me.
☆*゚ ゜゚*☆*゚ ゜゚*☆|Sigma★|
|Kaitou$|Daken :'D|Neuko's Pokemon Trainer|
|AF onii-chan: Jump_for_Luck||dark_butterfly's mommy|
|Elphaba's Penguin|Proud daughter of Aleyna and Anuket|
~ ♥ ~
Set by me.
☆*゚ ゜゚*☆*゚ ゜゚*☆|Sigma★|
|Kaitou$|Daken :'D|Neuko's Pokemon Trainer|
|AF onii-chan: Jump_for_Luck||dark_butterfly's mommy|
|Elphaba's Penguin|Proud daughter of Aleyna and Anuket|
~ ♥ ~
as MusicxLove motivated to improve my drawing, I just make another drawing as my style ^^ here ^^ gimme more suggestion ^^
daaaang! these recent four are hullla good=) really, my fave is the one with the dual braids an the butterfly in her face, shes really pretty, keep em coming yo
For being a amature drawing its good i like it.
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