my amateur drawing ^^

[kurai_cho2]

I really need your comment from your deepest heart (b'cause if I wanna hear my frenZ comment, they always say 'hmmm... good' without any expression T_T)

[iDensuke]

hmmm... good. haha just kidding, but they really are good, to an extent. the wings look like theyre comng out the back of the girls head, the guy with the cards looks good, especially the detail on the hair, and the girls in the rain is fairly simple. but the girls turned back with her back in view is good, nice abgle and body language, and my fave is the two people sitting together drinking and reading, excellent poses to show friendship between characters. now, to make it look better just start adding little details to ur work. simple stuff, like a nice belt or some design on the clothes, keep em coming yo

[Doctor One]

Your limbs are very thin dear. Compare the thickness of your arm to your head, (you will look silly when doing so). And work from there. And remember that the elbow is thicker then the rest of the arm.
Other then that, your clothes need more wrinkles.
I hope that helps.

[sapphirewyren]

AMETUER???!!! This looks like Picasso should be worshipping at your feet This is really good and I really mean that!!! You draw better than me and lots of people keep telling me I'm good, they should check this out.!!

[Kaisuke7]

You shade really good already keep it up. these are pretty good i like the 3nd one the figure is the most correct, the others the anatomy is a bit strange, demo keep at it thought love to see more.

[aishiteru333]

They all look very good but could work on body proportions on the girl with the wings.

[kurai_cho2]

waw... so many people give me praise and suggestion ^^ well I will keep on GANBARE to draw well hho^^

[kurai_cho2]

ehem... I have another sketches. plz give me more suggestion ^^

[iDensuke]

whoa! im really liken the one cut diagonally, did u just put extra effort into it? try to do that all the time!

[FirebornX]

Wow that new set of drawings looks sharp!
I like the kind of chibi-ish style you have going with the 1st drawing / group of characters and the babies.
The face study is interesting as well. However, I would suggest that you do it with different heads to familiarize yourself with how each character's face is unique.
I really like the dual bust / last drawing it looks crisp and very professional. I'm extremely impressed.
But I do notice that from your first set of drawings to your second that a lot of the problems you had, with proportion and other things, have pretty much been eradicated. Forgive me for the question but did you use existing professional artwork as drawing references?

[kurai_cho2]

whoa! im really liken the one cut diagonally, did u just put extra effort into it? try to do that all the time!

Wow that new set of drawings looks sharp!
I like the kind of chibi-ish style you have going with the 1st drawing / group of characters and the babies.
The face study is interesting as well. However, I would suggest that you do it with different heads to familiarize yourself with how each character's face is unique.
I really like the dual bust / last drawing it looks crisp and very professional. I'm extremely impressed.
But I do notice that from your first set of drawings to your second that a lot of the problems you had, with proportion and other things, have pretty much been eradicated. Forgive me for the question but did you use existing professional artwork as drawing references?

wa.... I know the chibby style is 'kawaiii ne^^' and the diagonal is awesome because I get inspired with character in Persona 4 and 3 ^^

[Erisa]

You pretty darn good
Just look up human anatomy things
and practice practice practice!
[:

[Nephilim]

Honestly the first and last pictures are bad in my opinion and they leave much to be desired.

However the middle three are much better. I love "Winter" and "Daisuke-kun" the most, the concepts are nice and the anatomy much better.

A girl could be better anatomy wise, also the hair is too stiff it should flow more and have some strands away from the rest.

As for the second batch of pictures:


In the first two pictures the heads are all too big like they are chibi versions of what you inteded them to be without being chibi at all, a common mistake and habbit that is easily broken once you realize you are doing it.

The expressions on the third pic are nice, but basic an ameturish, try to put more detail into eyes as characters they should be something specail about the eyes that makes them a focal point of the face and reveal how the character it. Intense eyes for serious or angry characters soft gentle eyes for gentle, nice, quiet, clutzy characters and then there's an inbetween area, its not something that can really be taught per say you learn how to fit things like that together through trial and error.

I love the fourth pic, it's concept is good and it's executed nicely simple yet still intricate enough to be attractive to look at. and the heads are a good size the emotions fit.

Overall you're fairly good, I look forward to seeing more, keep it up.

[kurai_cho2]

You pretty darn good
Just look up human anatomy things
and practice practice practice!
[:

Honestly the first and last pictures are bad in my opinion and they leave much to be desired.

However the middle three are much better. I love "Winter" and "Daisuke-kun" the most, the concepts are nice and the anatomy much better.

A girl could be better anatomy wise, also the hair is too stiff it should flow more and have some strands away from the rest.

As for the second batch of pictures:


In the first two pictures the heads are all too big like they are chibi versions of what you inteded them to be without being chibi at all, a common mistake and habbit that is easily broken once you realize you are doing it.

The expressions on the third pic are nice, but basic an ameturish, try to put more detail into eyes as characters they should be something specail about the eyes that makes them a focal point of the face and reveal how the character it. Intense eyes for serious or angry characters soft gentle eyes for gentle, nice, quiet, clutzy characters and then there's an inbetween area, its not something that can really be taught per say you learn how to fit things like that together through trial and error.

I love the fourth pic, it's concept is good and it's executed nicely simple yet still intricate enough to be attractive to look at. and the heads are a good size the emotions fit.

Overall you're fairly good, I look forward to seeing more, keep it up.

ummm... waw... so many suggestion for my drawing ^^
well, I will keep on GANBARE to draw more picture and more practise ^^
I will -keep-on-eye- for suggestion that u all give me b'cause I'm still amateur ^^

[Uta-chan~]

Amateur? Psh, yeah whatever. They're great! You just have to work on the eyes a bit. Look at some work from manga authors and see how they do their eyes then try copy some different styles until you can find one and make it your own. But these are very well done!

[kurai_cho2]

Amateur? Psh, yeah whatever. They're great! You just have to work on the eyes a bit. Look at some work from manga authors and see how they do their eyes then try copy some different styles until you can find one and make it your own. But these are very well done!

ThanXs ^^ I will keep on GANBARE to make a great character ^^ hmm.. copy?? well sometimes I used to copy from author, often I copy the character from Shinobu Inokuma-sensei ^^ but I often work hard to make my own character

[Uta-chan~]

Either way, you're doing great! ^^
It's hard to make your own sort of style first up so good luck with future drawings!
Keep practising~ =D

[kurai_cho2]

Either way, you're doing great! ^^
It's hard to make your own sort of style first up so good luck with future drawings!
Keep practising~ =D

yeap^^ thanXs ^^
yeah.. it's a little bit hard.... and sometimes I'm out of inspired... and stuck.. confused about face, cloth, etc...

[Uta-chan~]

yeap^^ thanXs ^^
yeah.. it's a little bit hard.... and sometimes I'm out of inspired... and stuck.. confused about face, cloth, etc...

No problem ^^
Yeah it gets hard sometimes when you don't have any inspiration or motivation... :/ But you can do it! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your drawings! Yay!! XD

[kurai_cho2]

No problem ^^
Yeah it gets hard sometimes when you don't have any inspiration or motivation... :/ But you can do it! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your drawings! Yay!! XD

yeap ^^
I will ^^ thanXs for your motivation ^^

[kurai_cho2]

as MusicxLove motivated to improve my drawing, I just make another drawing as my style ^^ here ^^ gimme more suggestion ^^

[iDensuke]

daaaang! these recent four are hullla good=) really, my fave is the one with the dual braids an the butterfly in her face, shes really pretty, keep em coming yo

[Sir_Vlaken]

For being a amature drawing its good i like it.

[kurai_cho2]

daaaang! these recent four are hullla good=) really, my fave is the one with the dual braids an the butterfly in her face, shes really pretty, keep em coming yo

For being a amature drawing its good i like it.

Arigato gozaimasu ^^

[Li Xia]

wow rai...mhmm keep it up huh...even though you just used simple mediums in your artwork still those are awesome masterpieces...mhmm good job rai...
~lhize