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    I've been having a lot of trouble writing lately. I'm not sure about this one's ending, but I tried. So, I hope you like it, and thanks for reading. *Tsuki*
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    Last Goodbye

    This is my last chance,
    to keep you here with me.
    I have to hold on tight,
    to stop the last goodbye.

    You'll leave if I let go,
    I'll have to say goodbye . . .

    But my grip is slipping,
    off your wet t-shirt,
    because I am falling,
    out cold in the rain.

    A warmness surrounds me,
    open my eyes and see a bed . . .

    Slowly, I stand up.
    I have to find you,
    I can't let you go,
    I can't stop loving you.

    Because ever since I first saw you,
    I knew you were the one . . .

    I'm lightheaded, I start falling,
    but an arm is there to hold me up.
    So strong and warm,
    you stand beside me.

    I look into your eyes, worry fills them.
    I ask, what's wrong, you smile. . .

    Nothing, nothing's wrong,
    you hold me close,
    and say you love me.
    I'm confused.

    Why would you say that?
    I thought you were leaving . . .

    Look outside, and it's not raining.
    The sun is shining bright.
    You're staring down at me,
    I don't have to say goodbye.

    Because you love me too,
    you won't say goodbye. . .


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    Awwww, such a sad poem in my eyes. I liked it and I can see why your having a lot of troubles "if your poem is based on the troubles ". Well, I liked the poem and each stanza was unique in different ways. Good job Tsuki :]
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    lol, thanks -Raiken-. ^^


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