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    Default 巡音ルカ Megurine Luka [Work in Progress]

    Megurine Luka is VOCALOID's third character who was just released in January of 2009. I really like her character design, it has a different feel than of the other characters.

    Here's a preview of what you can expect to be in the final version:

    *The current backdrop will not be used in the final.
    *The final will not be wallpaper sized.
    *The final will not have the pen tablet text.

    For a more detailed description of the work, please visit my DeviantArt page: 巡音ルカ Megurine Luka Preview by GreenVirus

    This image size: [Cropped] 1000x625 pixels.
    Original image size: 7000x8000 pixels.

    Comments are welcome...
    Last edited by Tsundere Works; 07-06-2009 at 06:05 PM.

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    The pink highlights in the skin is a nice touch.
    But the mouth is too small and her arms a bit too long.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Shedra View Post
    The pink highlights in the skin is a nice touch.
    But the mouth is too small and her arms a bit too long.
    Thank you for your opinion!

    There's no highlights in her hair yet, though. The mouth can be fixed, and the arm, well... I guess so too.

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    O: Woah, that's awesome.
    The only crit I have is, something about the face is a little weird. I dunno what, but other than that, it's really fab. 83
    Ohayo gozaimasu minna-san~
    Kyou, tanuki tabemashita. Ahahaha.

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    The eyes are too close to the edge of the face and far from each other, (a realistic face is 5 eyes wide.)
    I'm jealous of the sleeves' texture and shades!!
    I'm not inclined to resign to maturity

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    Be patient..

    The face is a bit too big for the body. Just clean around the face a little bit and it should be nice. The eyes are a bit too small for such a big face, but if you make the face smaller it won't be a problem. Everything else seems pretty decent.

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    Thank you very much everyone!

    I will try to fix it. So far:

    Her eyes are too small/face is too big [?]
    Her arm is too long [That's pretty clear, thanks!]

    I should have posted this before:

    Here's the original lineart so you can get an idea on how she looks:

    This is old work from May. It is extremely overdue. I have to finish this as soon as possible, and I need your help!

    How do you shade clothing? I'm having HUGE trouble with that. I think I may have to strip/reduce her of her clothing if I can't think on anything. LOL

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